Mini-Envelope Song

Finally you reach heaven
after all these years
of trying to live right
following the basic precepts
of decency and humanity

You weren't sure
what to expect
but you're pleasantly surprised
by the surroundings
It's hard to describe

being so amazing, stupendous
It's a delight to survive
in this kingdom of lusciousness
where everything is delicious,
the utmost supreme -----

Endeavors materialize without
any stress or strife
Perfectly structured to make
one feel divine, elated
to be part of the celestial.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Padhi Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 4:36 AM
Beautifully written Frank. I enjoyed the rhythm of it. Regards Nyla.
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November 28, 2017 at 3:56 PM
That is certainly something to hope for! Intriguing write about the hereafter. Though I sense this has a touch of humor in it, on a serious note, I think the best part of heaven is being able to reconnect with those whom we have lost.
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