Speaks Volumes Poet Rhyme

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Minichu

What’s funny ? Going mad! 
Try to write a poem within the rules, quick march.  
It is bad.

Look left and right. 
So please do not sneeze, Mini arch. 
I might. 
     
It's true.                                             
A mini arch.                                              
Chu.

What’s funny ? Going mad!                      
So please do not sneeze, Mini arch.  
Chu!

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I Am Anaya September 14, 2023 at 10:31 AM I'm impressed, you are a bonified comedian! Congratulations on your trophy win! Sorry I missed this one, here now:) Speaks Volumes September 14, 2023 at 7:47 PM Thanks Anaya.. Hey be honest young lady, I would call it silly but not funny! The words fitted the required rules that's all. I don't know how Mohan decided between you DD and I. Best wishes SV

Sotto Poet September 14, 2023 at 7:28 AM Hearty Congratulations dear friend SV, you placed on top podium and you amply deserve it with your wonderfully witty poem. Speaks Volumes September 14, 2023 at 7:43 PM Pantoums are a breeze compared to Minichu poems. Thank you so much my friend. I have completed the next one Mohan has posted, but I am not putting it up til I am sure its right. I am getting to like them. Thank you for you constant support. You have no idea how much it helps me. Sincerely SV

Linda Alice Fowler September 14, 2023 at 6:38 AM Back with huge congrats Svvie! Didn't I tell you Mohan would like it! Awesomeness!!! laf :) Speaks Volumes September 14, 2023 at 7:38 PM Thanks beautiful Laf, Big surprise. Best wishes SV

Ink Empress September 14, 2023 at 5:46 AM Oh my gosh power of words lol i dunno the rules for this but i had to literally hold myself together from sneezing as i read this! How powerful is this. I loved this fun read. Im so happy its placed as first, congratulations talented you! Ink Empress September 14, 2023 at 6:05 AM Awwn im so blessed to be a friend of a talented soul like u my queen of rhymes. Haha now i wanna try this Speaks Volumes September 14, 2023 at 5:59 AM Empress, just a warning, before you try a Minichu, sit yourself down in a padded room, with no sharp objects ! Heheheheheh. Thank you for your lovely comment. Best wishes, (hope you don't mind, but I am proud to call you my friend) SV

Mohan Chutani September 14, 2023 at 5:36 AM SV, congratulations for your placement in my contest. Best. Mohan Speaks Volumes September 14, 2023 at 5:53 AM Thank you so much Mohan ! I must admit I have never worked so hard on a poem in all my life. It got to the stage I would change it and then put it back again, still unconvinced I had it right, I would finish a poem and hurry back to my Minichu to check it for the last 15 times. Thanks so much for your contest. It has taught me not to 2nd guess myself. Every best wish from SV

Linda Alice Fowler August 30, 2023 at 7:20 AM LOL. What fun! Mohan will like this I'm sure. Archu to you too! GL my Svvie! Speaks Volumes August 30, 2023 at 10:45 PM Well I am glad you and a few others do Laf. It nearly cost me my sanity !. Thanks for your lovely comment.

Silent One August 28, 2023 at 2:36 AM I have never heard of this from before, but it seems like an interesting one and you seem to have done a good poem for it.. Speaks Volumes August 28, 2023 at 5:25 AM (I liken it to a brain teaser). Its like doing a jig saw puzzle with no borders. I still am not sure if I hit the nail on the head. The more I check it, the more I question myself, Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Best wishes from SV

Sotto Poet August 27, 2023 at 7:30 PM You have painstakingly crafted a beautiful Minichu, ensuring that every aspect adheres to the strict rules of the contest. Your creation is not only visually stunning but also showcases your imaginative ideas and is presented humorously. Best wishes for the contest Speaks Volumes August 27, 2023 at 7:52 PM Thanks you my sweet friend, if its wrong. its staying that way !