Minichu - Celebration

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Written: December 23, 2023, For Mohan Chutani Contest ___________________________________________ This desk bears wedding rings. formal banquets, lonesome dinners, and warm welcome sweet greetings It groaned and creaked had stood time test to some oil leaked! spilt grape lend mood to come shape!! this desk bears wedding rings. had stood time test to some shape!!

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/31/2024 2:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/30/2024 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations dear Las! :)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 1/29/2024 6:39:00 PM

Dear Sotto, thanks for participating in my contest. a unique imagery of joy, celebrations through the imagery of the desk that witnesses and participates in momentus events of our lives. Congratulations for your placement. Wishing you best for New Year and times ahead. Mohan.

Paige Hind

Date: 12/27/2023 8:20:00 PM

Lovely work, Sotto! I love this form, and you did it so well!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/23/2023 9:43:00 PM

Ah dr sotto, You do these minichus so well and effortlessly making them flow so well too. I love the rhymes used here as well as how you’ve written for celebrations in such a creative manner: especially rings and greetings how you’ve made those two words rhyme is beyond impeccable! And i love the imagery too so descriptive. The last three lines seem to fall together so well and goes very well together, pleasure reading this unique and artistic take, im sure will score very high in the contest