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Miniature Golf

Crash go the fenders Smash goes the car Shattered, the windows Hey, we broke par!

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Date: 9/23/2023 7:50:00 PM
Unique and clever poem Gershon. I have the hardest time getting the ball through tunnel, over the bridge and through the clown's mouth! This one put a smile on my face. :) My son's too. A cute one!
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:33:00 PM
You certainly did, Gershon. Different and fun to read. Harry
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Date: 12/8/2022 5:35:00 PM
Game on! LOL
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Date: 12/8/2022 4:17:00 PM
Never happened to me; I can’t even hit the ball with the stick thing. ;-) Terry
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Date: 12/8/2022 12:55:00 PM
Pass the eggnog!
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Date: 12/8/2022 3:35:00 PM
Ha, ha,ha, ha. Love the comment, Anaya! (-- if not the eggnog!). Thanks, gw
Date: 12/8/2022 11:41:00 AM
Hey now! I think you must have watched me playing... That's the only way it's fun!
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Date: 12/8/2022 3:40:00 PM
Are you sure you're not a 'NASCAR Golfer,' Becky?! lol.
Date: 12/8/2022 9:50:00 AM
(chuckling) Too many times, gw...my experience!
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Date: 12/8/2022 3:44:00 PM
As long as you broke par, all is well, eh?!
Date: 12/7/2022 7:55:00 PM
He, he, he...juvenile delinquent!
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Date: 12/8/2022 3:45:00 PM
They caught me in the 'sand trap,' I'm afraid.
Date: 12/7/2022 7:52:00 PM
Perhaps getting a new driver will help.....that and a little work on your short game
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Date: 12/7/2022 7:31:00 PM
Needed this morning guffaw!
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Date: 12/8/2022 3:46:00 PM
Always good to guffaw, Seeker! ~ Guff, Guff, Aw, Aw

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