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Miniature Golf

Crash go the fenders
    Smash goes the car
  Shattered, the windows
    Hey, we broke par!

Copyright © Gershon Wolf | Year Posted 2022

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Marikate Kingston

September 23, 2023 at 7:50 PM

Unique and clever poem Gershon. I have the hardest time getting the ball through tunnel, over the bridge and through the clown's mouth! This one put a smile on my face. :) My son's too. A cute one!

December 8, 2022 at 8:33 PM

You certainly did, Gershon. Different and fun to read. Harry

December 8, 2022 at 5:35 PM

Game on! LOL

December 8, 2022 at 4:17 PM

Never happened to me; I can’t even hit the ball with the stick thing. ;-) Terry

December 8, 2022 at 12:55 PM

Pass the eggnog!

December 8, 2022 at 3:35 PM

Ha, ha,ha, ha. Love the comment, Anaya! (-- if not the eggnog!). Thanks, gw

December 8, 2022 at 11:41 AM

Hey now! I think you must have watched me playing... That's the only way it's fun!

December 8, 2022 at 3:40 PM

Are you sure you're not a 'NASCAR Golfer,' Becky?! lol.

L Milton Hankins

December 8, 2022 at 9:50 AM

(chuckling) Too many times, gw...my experience!

December 8, 2022 at 3:44 PM

As long as you broke par, all is well, eh?!

December 7, 2022 at 7:55 PM

He, he, he...juvenile delinquent!

December 8, 2022 at 3:45 PM

They caught me in the 'sand trap,' I'm afraid.

December 7, 2022 at 7:52 PM

Perhaps getting a new driver will help.....that and a little work on your short game

Unseeking Seeker

December 7, 2022 at 7:31 PM

Needed this morning guffaw!

December 8, 2022 at 3:46 PM

Always good to guffaw, Seeker! ~ Guff, Guff, Aw, Aw

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