Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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28.09.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Mini-ku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina

1st place in the contest

- Mini Ku - Leaf Thief -

                                                                    water rills
                                                             leaves drifting lively -
                                                                    liquid gold







* - "water rills" ... decorative canals where water flows through

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Andrea Dietrich October 7, 2025 at 8:54 PM Congratulations on the win of your beautiful poem

Valsa George October 7, 2025 at 8:18 PM Beautiful Mini ku. Congratulations Anne on your first place win. Hugs

Abdullah Alhemaidy October 7, 2025 at 12:16 PM Congratulations on your nice win! hugs AA

Paula Goldsmith October 7, 2025 at 11:56 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Leaf Thief" is a fun write. Great/Fun Picture... Have a Blessed day writing away.........

Ghairo Daniels October 7, 2025 at 10:59 AM Lovely, Sweets ! I adore the liquid gold imagery. And you find pretty pics too. Hugs. ThkU for checking out mine as well. I just remembered that Norway is in the same time zone as South Africa. I sometimes get clients from Norway. X.

Howard Kerr October 7, 2025 at 7:10 AM Amazing write, Congratulations to you on your shared first medal placement , Anne-Lise Howard

Charles Messina October 7, 2025 at 5:45 AM One of my fav's, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your winning placement with this lovely miniku! Hugs :)

Dr. Vandana Sharma October 2, 2025 at 2:32 AM The precious metal flowing in autumn!!!

Kevin Leake October 1, 2025 at 1:11 PM Enjoyed this Haiku Love the last line Liquid gold Well written Kevin

Duke Beaufort September 30, 2025 at 2:34 PM Anne-Lise, you describe what's fun to watch. It's pretty dry here, so we are looking forward to rain....just don't know when we'll get it. Smiles!!

Andrea Dietrich September 30, 2025 at 11:27 AM This is lovely just like your entry in my September contest. I don't know why, but I cannot get my comment on your entry in my contest to go thru on the poem itself. I hope it goes through on this page! Congratulations in my contest

Howard Kerr September 29, 2025 at 12:25 PM Anne-Lise, I enjoyed this classic from your golden pen. Marvellous word choice and starting letters for cohesion. Effortless flow. Imaginative piece. Best of luck. Thanks for praising my work. Warm wishes Howard

Sara Kendrick September 29, 2025 at 7:05 AM Yes, that leaf does look like liquid gold. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Joseph P. DiMino September 29, 2025 at 4:50 AM Indeed both spring and autumn seasons of colorful transitions. Great entry!

Sotto Poet September 29, 2025 at 3:18 AM A flawless haiku, falling leaves in a variety of fall tones. Best wishes for winning.

Victor Buhagiar September 29, 2025 at 2:37 AM Perfect haiku, shades of autumn bring down leaves. Best for a win.

sara Etgen-Baker September 28, 2025 at 6:49 PM perfect contest entry. I sincerely liked the title--it's engaging. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2025 at 1:08 AM - Thank you very much for your comment, Sara :) - hugs

William Kelii Kekaula September 28, 2025 at 11:26 AM South of Oslo this be as our coconut palm leaves would slam that cool gem. Aloha. Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2025 at 11:37 AM - About 430 kilometers to Oslo from where I live, Hilo :) - hugs