Mini-Golf

Vicious storms rolled through... we got sopped Played Mini-Golf dancing between the raindrops A fun time for all Swatting the wee ball Came in last but still came out feeling on top

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 6/20/2017 7:57:00 AM

Some think Jack's flipped his lid//but really he's just a big kid//It ain't uncouth//It's the fountain of youth!//Keep beeing silly, ya won't skid. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/20/2017 8:20:00 AM

Being silly is guaranteed!!! Sure had a blast! GOOD MORNING BACK, JOHN JOHN!!!

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/20/2017 7:33:00 AM

Does anybody ever really win at mini golf? It's a place to go and have fun. If you had fun, you were a winner:)

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/20/2017 7:39:00 AM

It was great fun, you're right! I was a winner!