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Mine Mutter

. grunt groan grumble i snort not at the white dust yet at the gust the blast burst breeze heaven's breathe that carried my mother away

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John Loving Iii

Date: 11/10/2009 9:59:00 AM

i hope things are well with you. they say you were missing. but now i see you've returned. jhl

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/10/2009 9:07:00 AM

oh James! Throwing my arms around you!!! We returned my mother to the wind a few years ago too... I've missed her recently (vividly)... I can relate. With all my love! This is a beautiful heartfelt write. One word at a time, powerful...and then it just sent me to my knees. I'm grateful to read you today :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/10/2009 6:30:00 AM

James, this is sad, so sad..yet Ill bet your mother would be proud of you for writing it. Bg

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/10/2009 3:43:00 AM

I have no words.life s been unkind to you lately,but we are not made to sat here forever,we all know it James,and we all konw one day we ll meet our loved ones again,for now we fill our hearts with thiers soul,whilst they watch us grow,proud of us,im sure your Mum is proud of you,,Can feel the pain,i can James and im sorry--Charma