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Mine

All forbidden to this girl, my Gran's sweet precious treasures, pearls, brooches, earrings and things _ these treasures now . . . mine ______________________ October 25, 2022 Poetry/Dodoitsu/Mine Copyright Protected, ID 10-1496-834-25 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bitesize No. 54 sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 11/08/2022

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Date: 10/25/2022 10:48:00 AM
Isn't "mine" the third word a child learns? Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2022 6:22:00 PM
Rico, lol, thanks for the compliment, I recall "don't touch" being said a lot to me, blessings
Date: 10/25/2022 7:41:00 AM
Great for the contest. Many blessings my friend
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Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2022 8:09:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, blessings

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