Mine

 
All forbidden to this girl, my Gran's sweet precious treasures, pearls, brooches, earrings and things _ these treasures now . . . mine ______________________ October 25, 2022 Poetry/Dodoitsu/Mine Copyright Protected, ID 10-1496-834-25 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bitesize No. 54 sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 11/08/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Leffanta Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Isn't "mine" the third word a child learns? Enjoyed! Aloha!
La France Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Rico, lol, thanks for the compliment, I recall "don't touch" being said a lot to me, blessings
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:41 AM
Great for the contest. Many blessings my friend
La France Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the visit and compliment, blessings
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace