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Minds Eye Can See Vision Comp

Through the corridors of time you travel Just a gorgeous twinkle in a tenuous universe So surreal to see you trip in my minds eye Twirling into view like a dirvish of arcane times Chanting in a Murmurous whisper incantations then with a sonorous thunder clap she's gone my very own tinker bell as turned to dust she was more than any grown up's eye can see. 26052016 comp entry

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Date: 10/20/2016 10:08:00 AM
Stephen, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 10/20/2016 11:23:00 AM
cheers eve
Date: 10/20/2016 7:56:00 AM
very well written Stephen the first line sets an awesome tone for the rest of the poem....congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/20/2016 8:56:00 AM
many thanks laura loo

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