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Mindfulness

Sunset evolves into a praise sight of holiness.
Above everything, love elevates the sublime.
Serenity would ensure our abiding happiness.
And into infinity, we play and adoringly rhyme. 

Above everything, love elevates the sublime.
Mindfulness is a gift bestowed by a gracious fate.
And into infinity, we play and adoringly rhyme.
Shades shine every day owing to the golden gate.
 
Mindfulness is a gift bestowed by a gracious fate.
It's pretty crucial to sate a deep breath of fresh air.
Shades shine every day owing to the golden gate.
No question around life; let us all come along if we care.

It's pretty crucial to sate a deep breath of fresh air.
Serenity would ensure our abiding happiness.
No question around life; let us all come along if we care.
Sunset evolves into a praise sight of holiness.


Written: May 19, 2021

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Alexis Y. Date: 5/19/2021 3:22:00 PM WoW! Lasaad, You nailed the contest challenge with this well-written Pantoum. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/19/2021 4:21:00 PM Thanks, dearest Alexis; your visit to my page is so lovely, and your caring words and wishes are really encouraging; blessings and hugs, Alexis

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/19/2021 2:15:00 PM Superb Pantoum , excellently written, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good luck my dearest friend. Blessings Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/19/2021 4:18:00 PM Thank you so much, my dearest Demetrios, your visit is so much appreciated also your kind words and wishes, have a blessed evening and best regards

David Kavanagh Date: 5/19/2021 1:00:00 PM This is fantastic Lasaad, I’ve failed miserably trying to pen Pantoums in the past, you really need the perfect wording and I think you have found it, silky smooth and seamless, a lot of musing went into this and I really believe it shall pay off in the contest, best of luck, cheers David Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/19/2021 4:16:00 PM Much appreciated, dear friend, your caring words are so much reassuring, and I'm happy you like it; I simply need to reveal to you that the structure isn't troublesome; you merely need to compose a six lines piece and afterward attempt to place them in the Panton structure because each stanza is recorded twice, best of luck and all the best

Victor Buhagiar Date: 5/19/2021 10:41:00 AM Your pantoum is excellent, smooth and well rhymed. Sent you a soup mail. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/19/2021 10:57:00 AM Thank you so much, dear friend; your comment is very supportive, and thanks for your soup mail. Blessings and best regards

Tom Cunningham Date: 5/19/2021 10:19:00 AM I always find this a tricky form to write but you've made it look easy Lasaad. Good luck in the contest. Tom Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 5/19/2021 11:11:00 AM My gratitude for your great visit, dear Friend Tom. To be honest, it wasn't easy to pen, and it took me a decent measure of time to completely get it molded. Blessings and best regards