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regrouping i take a deep breath like nothing else matters owning the moment basking in its magnificence relishing in the focus the intensity of being present the pulsating rhythm of consciousness and synchronized openness making peace with time letting go of the past of what’s ahead of what’s next experiencing life in segments having sublimely discovered the secret to stretching time measuring life in instants and gaining a feeling of… if not control at least harmony as it becomes a way of life showing me what’s most rewarding Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~MINDFULLY~ 2021 AP: 1st place 2021, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on May 3, 2019 for contest HONOURABLE MENTIONS WORTH MENTIONING sponsored by RICHARD LAMOUREUX... For a workaholic with constant time constraints, it is a big step to finally find the power within to slow life down. - RANKED 4TH Originally submitted on February 8, 2019 for contest MINDFULNESS sponsored by CHANTELLE ANNE COOKE - HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 5/13/2019 10:50:00 AM
I like this Line-- only wish you had expanded on the theme-- far you might travel with it....
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Date: 5/13/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely compliment, LJ. A longer poem sounds like a great idea.
Date: 5/12/2019 9:34:00 AM
Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 5/12/2019 10:52:00 AM
Thanks for hosting this great contest, Richard.
Date: 2/19/2019 11:00:00 PM
Congratulation, I'm mindful of how good this poem is.
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Date: 2/19/2019 11:39:00 PM
LOL thank you for your witty compliment, Timothy.
Date: 2/18/2019 2:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, LIne. You gave a very good definition of mindfulness.
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Date: 2/18/2019 3:20:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.
Date: 2/17/2019 6:15:00 AM
Such a terrific line, Line, "if not control at least harmony". It captures the true active meaning of what all the gurus try to say about mindfulness. Jon Kabat-Zinn would rush up and give you a very big hug. I'll simply pass on quiet congratulations and poetic hugs. Namaste.
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Date: 2/17/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely visit and most appreciated compliment. All hugs gladly accepted.
Date: 2/16/2019 7:02:00 PM
Great poem! Few ever comment on its pulsating rhythm ~ awareness of it’s intensity can vary but it’s always fully present.
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Date: 2/16/2019 7:58:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, PM.
Date: 2/16/2019 3:47:00 PM
Back with congratulations! :) xomo
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Date: 2/16/2019 4:22:00 PM
Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Date: 2/10/2019 4:57:00 PM
Beautifully done; I was there, in each word and each moment. Wonderfully penned and I hope it does well in the contest.
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Date: 2/10/2019 5:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/10/2019 5:42:00 AM
Harmony n Synchronization. So well composed. All the best.
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Date: 2/10/2019 6:57:00 AM
Thanks, Anisha. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/9/2019 2:46:00 PM
Had to "fav"; I love living in mindfulness.
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Date: 2/9/2019 3:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML, for your lovely visit and compliment.
Date: 2/8/2019 2:03:00 PM
A great write...you got it just right. BG
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Date: 2/8/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara.
Date: 2/8/2019 1:53:00 PM
Very well written! So important too :)
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Date: 2/8/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Heidi.
Date: 2/8/2019 12:54:00 PM
Wonderfully penned Line! Just excellent. My best to you in the contest. xomo
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Date: 2/8/2019 2:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated.

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