Seren Roberts Poet Limerick

Mindful Or Mindless

My desk is all of a shamble
My garden is full of bramble
Does this show me to be
High in ability
Or just a bad example 


So, if I tidy up the mess
Would my intelligence be less
Would I be a social turd
Misunderstanding each word
Just like a politician ... yes?


Einsteins Quote :
If a cluttered desk, signs a cluttered mind, of what, then, is an empty desk a sign?

Penned 17 April 2015

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Kajika Fowling May 10, 2015 at 10:34 PM Seren Roberts, it brought a smile onto my face. But it also made me question stuff I hadn't though about. Perspective +1.

John Freeman May 1, 2015 at 2:17 PM Great humor, good quality of quote used. Thanks for your participation, Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2015 at 10:29 PM hahaha. the second one was REALLY good. I love what you picked for your quote. I have a little sign in my house that says, Housework is a four letter word and something else about being cluttered (but it's a flattering quote!) Congrats. REally liked yours.

Eve Roper April 30, 2015 at 9:51 PM Wonderful write, Seren, congratulations on your win :~)

Nandita Das April 30, 2015 at 8:42 PM Brilliant write. Loved this. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison April 30, 2015 at 5:45 PM Dropping back with my congratulations Seren - still live the social turd line lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A April 30, 2015 at 1:16 PM Seren, Congratulations on your Famous Einstein Quotes :) SKAT LOVE

Maurice Yvonne April 19, 2015 at 9:03 AM Great Lime Ricky, very funny but this is a style you are very comfortable with. Great write, you done good.

Anna Hopper April 17, 2015 at 9:35 AM I LOVE this! Most of us poets, writers, creators etc. have a cluttered lifestyle. Most genius people are messy! A7 Seren Roberts April 18, 2015 at 2:48 AM Anna fine thanks for stopping and commenting, I am just glad to have an excuse for my clutter....Seren

Jan Allison April 17, 2015 at 6:56 AM ha ha ha - a social turd - on boy what a line - oh Seren I laughed out loud at these Limericks! Good luck in the contest I hope this does really well for you:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx politicians and babies nappies need changing often ..... and for the same reason! Seren Roberts April 18, 2015 at 2:49 AM Your comment made me laugh Jan. maybe they won't understand what I meant. Hahaha......Seren