Home » Poems » Anitha Jayasankar » Mindful Moments

Mindful Moments

Like shapes new that form from uneven clay, mind greets thoughts anew that evoke delight; hope revives for a fresh start every day, like shapes new that form from uneven clay. Positive vibes open doors to make way for graceful acts creative sparks ignite. Like shapes new that form from uneven clay, mind greets thoughts anew that evoke delight. Like shapes new that form from uneven clay, hope revives for a fresh start every day. Positive vibes open doors to make way for graceful acts creative sparks ignite. Mind greets thoughts anew that evoke delight as sunflower welcomes dawn’s first ray bright.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Daniel De Culla

Date: 11/19/2024 7:08:00 AM

I enjoy it. You're Yes. Kisses

Michael Tor

Date: 11/16/2024 4:29:00 AM

Anitha your words are very uplifting to the reader. You focus on renewal in fresh thoughts for our minds. Lovely piece you have written here... Enjoy your day...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2024 12:14:00 PM

Creative lines that are uplifting and encouraging. I like the idea that sunflower/s welcome the dawn. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Tom Woody

Date: 10/23/2024 5:48:00 AM

"hope revives for a fresh start every day... as sunflower welcomes dawn's first ray". Lovely sentiments Anitha. Have a great week

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/23/2024 4:28:00 AM

Dear Anitha, I loved how you emphasized the idea of renewal and creativity. And, yes, like uneven clay being shaped into new forms, our minds can embrace fresh thoughts and positive energy each day. I also liked how you gave us hope and inspired creative actions, like a sunflower welcoming the morning light. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Jcb Brul

Date: 10/22/2024 9:19:00 AM

Wonderful triolet dear Anita. It evokes hope and positivity even from imperfect beginnings. Happy to see you back my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2024 9:38:00 AM

You did really really well with this form, Ani. So good to see you here writing.

Silent One

Date: 10/20/2024 1:51:00 AM

Hello my friend, so good to see you posting after such a long time.. Your poem beautifully captures the process of renewal and creativity using the metaphor of shaping clay. The repeated line, "Like shapes new that form from uneven clay," emphasizes the idea of transformation and the constant potential for growth, despite imperfections. The imagery suggests that each day offers the opportunity for a fresh start, and the poet aligns this with positive energy, creativity, and hope. Nice one.

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/20/2024 8:15:00 AM

Hello S1. Thank you so much for the inspiring comment. Yes, I was not on here for a very long time, I know. Sometimes, life keeps us busy. Hope you are doing good my friend. God bless... ~ Ani

Ink Empress

Date: 10/19/2024 12:47:00 PM

Dear Anita, its so good to see you post, been a while and this is such a beautiful and creative triolet. I love the rhymes and also how youv written many lines such as “ Like shapes new that form from uneven clay, mind greets thoughts anew that evoke delight.“ what a catchy refrain ! Mindful moments Youv captured through this so very well: theres so much wisdom and thoughts put into your words and that makes your poem stand out really! Read it few times and i cant help but be inspired! Change, through midnfulness, we embrace. Pleasure reading your work today. Sending you light always

Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/19/2024 11:46:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Ink. Yes, it's been a very long time since I have been on here active. Am so glad my words inspired you. Have a great lovely day. Hugs and smiles ~ Ani