Mindful

thoughtless multitude Great Pacific Garbage Patch ~ thoughtful attitude

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/24/2023 3:28:00 AM

Woah, this is such a wonderful senryu, such thoughtless altitudes definitely add to the degrading climate of this world.. You've definitely, in a way, raised a voice towards coming up with innovative and feasible ideas to combat and overcome the troubles that have been created by humans so far..

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/25/2023 12:35:00 PM

Hi Hiya! Thank you for visiting with kind and thoughtful comments. I appreciate it! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/22/2023 8:49:00 PM

That's the way it turned out this time... I wonder if the next world will do better? Nice Senryu, Linda. Write On! Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/23/2023 5:19:00 AM

Let's hope so Bill. With so many good ideas and advances in technology, who knows what to expect. I'd love to be around to find out. Thanks for reading and commenting neighbor. :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 8/22/2023 10:31:00 AM

Nice Senryu, Linda. Can one thoughtful attitude overcome billions of thoughtless minds? I believe so.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/22/2023 11:20:00 AM

I hope you are correct Jerry. But sometimes reality overtakes a thoughtful attitude, yes? :)

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/22/2023 8:36:00 AM

It's a disgrace and the fact that its getting bigger means that more rubbish is being dumped. All manufacturers should be forced to only use bio-degradable packaging and wrapping. That wont fix the problem but, but its one step closer to slowing it. What a thoughtful poem Laf. You have a thoughtful attitude, Love your Senryu

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/26/2023 12:55:00 PM

Some reports say its bigger than the state I live in Las, and I have seen aerial shot photos, its pretty darn big !

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/22/2023 10:01:00 AM

Hey Svvie! It's not the huge pile of trash you might think. In the long run, it is thousands of tiny pieces of plastic, still detrimental. Thanks for your continued support my dear friend. :)

Lin Lane

Date: 8/22/2023 8:33:00 AM

It's become a terrible disaster, along with all the other man-made tragedies today. Nice rhyming Senryu, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/22/2023 9:59:00 AM

Yes, and what is the balance between man and Nature? Is there a way we can co-exist? Thanks Lin my friend!