Mindful

thoughtless multitude
	Great Pacific Garbage Patch ~
		thoughtful attitude
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August 24, 2023 at 3:28 AM
Woah, this is such a wonderful senryu, such thoughtless altitudes definitely add to the degrading climate of this world.. You've definitely, in a way, raised a voice towards coming up with innovative and feasible ideas to combat and overcome the troubles that have been created by humans so far..
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August 25, 2023 at 12:35 PM
Hi Hiya! Thank you for visiting with kind and thoughtful comments. I appreciate it! :)
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August 22, 2023 at 8:49 PM
That's the way it turned out this time... I wonder if the next world will do better? Nice Senryu, Linda. Write On! Bill
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August 23, 2023 at 5:19 AM
Let's hope so Bill. With so many good ideas and advances in technology, who knows what to expect. I'd love to be around to find out. Thanks for reading and commenting neighbor. :)
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August 22, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Nice Senryu, Linda. Can one thoughtful attitude overcome billions of thoughtless minds? I believe so.
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August 22, 2023 at 11:20 AM
I hope you are correct Jerry. But sometimes reality overtakes a thoughtful attitude, yes? :)
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August 22, 2023 at 8:36 AM
It's a disgrace and the fact that its getting bigger means that more rubbish is being dumped. All manufacturers should be forced to only use bio-degradable packaging and wrapping. That wont fix the problem but, but its one step closer to slowing it. What a thoughtful poem Laf. You have a thoughtful attitude, Love your Senryu
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August 26, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Some reports say its bigger than the state I live in Las, and I have seen aerial shot photos, its pretty darn big !
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August 22, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Hey Svvie! It's not the huge pile of trash you might think. In the long run, it is thousands of tiny pieces of plastic, still detrimental. Thanks for your continued support my dear friend. :)
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August 22, 2023 at 8:33 AM
It's become a terrible disaster, along with all the other man-made tragedies today. Nice rhyming Senryu, Linda.
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August 22, 2023 at 9:59 AM
Yes, and what is the balance between man and Nature? Is there a way we can co-exist? Thanks Lin my friend!
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