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Notes About The Poem

Mindful

time

somewhat like
the vinyl on a
record player

are we
the needle or
the speck
of dust

a decision
of mindfulness



Submitted on June 24, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (JUN 25) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

Posted on June 5, 2021

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Sam Kauffman Date: 6/28/2021 9:53:00 AM Great images Line! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/28/2021 9:49:00 PM Thank you very much, Sam ~

Carol Mays Date: 6/6/2021 7:55:00 PM Thought-provoking. Great images. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/7/2021 4:32:00 PM Thank you very much, Carol ~

Regina Mcintosh Date: 6/6/2021 7:15:00 AM I love this, Line. God bless you. Love, Gina Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/6/2021 4:31:00 PM Thank you very much, Gina ~

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/6/2021 7:01:00 AM A succinct yet mesmerizing take on the "Mindfulness" theme, Line:-) Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/6/2021 4:31:00 PM Thank you very much, Edward ~

Nancy Kaufman Date: 6/6/2021 6:14:00 AM Hi Line, I liked this profound poem but you generally go deep, don't you? I also like your visuals. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/6/2021 4:31:00 PM Thanks, Nancy ~

Joe Dimino Date: 6/5/2021 1:55:00 PM Top of the groves, in the gullies...a speck and the needle at times. God I'm dizzy!! Love it! Great little read -- says a lot. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/5/2021 2:09:00 PM Took you for a spin ~ lol

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/5/2021 11:05:00 AM Hello Lin, these a re thoughts to ponder. Hugs Darlene Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/6/2021 12:08:00 PM Hello Lin, you are welcome. Hugs. Line Gauthier Date: 6/5/2021 11:54:00 AM Thank you, Darlene. Have a wonderful weekend ~