Mind Your Own Business

“Mind your own Business!!”
By:.Peter Neendoor

Darling child, borne
in lawful love
and born beloved,
comes of age, turns around,
and nonchalantly says,
“Mind your own business.”

Late nights and phone calls
a room a world in its own
align the inquiring youth
to zero - gravity possibilities;
and the internet's wide window
on the brave new world brings
a free spirit serenading love.
The parents ask, “what is this?”
“Mind your own business.”

They wait with love
and prayers for the child
to wake up and say
something  more filial.

Will the precious son,
jailed for illegal drugs,
growl to the parents visiting,
“Mind your own business?”

Could dearest daughter, giving birth
to an accidental child
in unmentionable shame,
point to someone and say,
“That is the baby’s father?”
or still shout at her chaste mother,
“Mind your own business?.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Cheriyamadam Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 11:06 AM
dear peter: Thank u for sending the poem : "MOB"! Unfortunately, many a parents, especially in the US, have heard that mind chilling shrill.
Thomas Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 8:53 PM
Where were you all this time? I mean, thanks. This poem is great. Very good diction and cadence. Infused with empathy for the parents of all misguided children, it speaks to the heart of anyone who would have the domestic pieties stay inviolate. I don't care if you be Christian or Buddhist, or whatever, but you speak for me so poignantly and truly I wish I wrote this lament. Raju Thomas
Itticheria Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 8:39 PM
Hi Peter. Good to see your poem,it looks great ,keep doing it.Hope to see more of this and my best wishes to you.Love,Chacko
Shahwan Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 6:37 AM
Well written. I'm wondering.. where's the parental love and guidance in this poem? it's full of anger and indirectly portrays a shallow christian family, but the poem is truthful.. though it is parallel with the biblical verse regarding: children pay their parents' prices. Wishing you all the best.
Neendoor Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 6:51 PM
Thank you all for your inspiring comments. Peter Neendoor.
Adeite Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 9:21 AM
Hey peter, my passion is to see the world become a better place and I see that same passion in you through this piece of yours. I love every bit of this poem and I am going to add it to my favourite. I love your style of writing; please keep writing, you are great! Welcome to poetrysoup. You will have fun and learn from great writers. Love, Adeleke
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 5:29 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Peter. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors.I hope you will be joining us as a premium member here at the site. Love, Carol
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September 11, 2009 at 6:19 PM
nice poem. welcome to poetry soup. im kinda new myself. > Hosea
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