Mind the Wet Paint

In my mind are many rooms, but the one most interesting of all my rooms would be the room of my imagination. In this room are thousands upon thousands of closets, cabinets, and shelves, and inside each one are different pieces of my imagination! Each cabinet is organized by type. Some are surreal in color or vivid technicolor! Those pieces are my dreams. My fantasies are closeted. The ones made manifest on paper or computer are sitting out on shelves! All the ones which can be seen are those I call my poems or stories. Most are not dark in color but are bright or multi-colored. I decorate the room of my imagination often. You may come and see my new shelves at any time! Do mind the wet paint. March 20, 2018 For Viv Wigley's "Mind the Wet Paint" Poetry Contest (this is a shortened version revised from the one I posted earlier this month, not realizing there was a line limit!)
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Kauffman Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Wonderful - wonderful metaphor! I loved it. Such a delightful way to picture the way our minds hold and organize the inspirations that motivate us to write! Congratulations my friend. This was masterfully done and so creative!
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 9:53 PM
What a well organized mind you have, dear Andrea. Clutter free yet very intriguing, I am jealous. Congrats on your win.
K. Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 1:29 AM
Happy Easter and April Fool's Day, sweetie! Haha, your eyes are not fooling you. Just dropping by quickly to say hi! Hope you got my email. I enjoyed this peek into your rooms, especially your room of imagination. As I was reading it, can't help but say to myself, that shucks, mine is not as organized, lol. Anyhow, love how at the end, you say mind the wet paint ;)!
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:51 PM
So glad to see you amended the original poem which i commented on, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
May Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea..
Wigley Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 7:37 AM
Congrats, Andrea, and thanks for entering with your lovely write. Now, put those brushes down and have a coffee :) Viv x
Moorman Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:42 AM
Andrea, I have always wished to explore your mind because of the deep admiration I have for your poetry and the so very descriptive way you make words paint pictures of the very essence of life. Great write from a truly great friend. Congrats!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:26 AM
Congratulation, Andrea on your win. A fabulous poem, great imagery.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 7:02 PM
Love the last lines! And my fantasies are closeted! Nice one!
Godwin Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 2:34 PM
Well done! You delivered a well crafted mind, I like your approach. Mine is in rough form as of today. These should all be fun reads. I enjoyed your immensely, my Andrea. Love you ... CayCay
Parker Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 6:31 PM
I thought I recognized it. and yes I did...I think I said something about your mind or rooms being so organized and mine being a mess...good luck
Hagy Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 4:29 PM
This is really cool Andrea! :) I love the idea of physically manifesting thoughts or feelings and you nailed it here. I wrote something along this line many years ago... maybe I'll have to dig it out and revise it :) Thanks for the inspiration today Andrea :)
One Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 3:52 PM
I remember this... good luck in the contest..
Michael Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 3:32 PM
This is good...Everything about it...I like how organized your rooms are...Clear...All the best Andrea
Bauer Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 3:32 PM
this is a delightful room to visit, andrea, and i'm sure i'll drop by many more times in the years to come...
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