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I imagine my mind as if an egg, and inside is the true essence of me; more than just the power to move a leg, inside is my past and thoughts filigree. So, I think I will decorate my mind, with mauve images and patterns whimsy; I will be a fancy egg quite refined, invisible- but I will let you see. Then, you will know my personality, a girl subdued who likes to whirl and twirl; I live my life with whimsicality, but, in my mind sadness does unfurl. Within is a path not always happy, but I am a sweet egg- not unhappy. __________________________________ February 22, 2018 Poetry/Sonnet/Mind The Wet Paint Copyright Protected, ID 18-9964-82-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Mind the Wet Paint sponsor, Viv Wigley Second Place ___________________________________ Non Pentameter Sonnet, ababcdcdefefgg Syllables checked on Howmanysyllables.com Rhyming checked on Rhymezone.com

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Date: 4/9/2018 9:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, BW. Superbly done.
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Date: 3/24/2018 10:06:00 AM
Lovely imagery of your mind, Constance. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:32:00 PM
An eggcellent portrayal of you Constance! congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2018 10:09:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win. Lovely sonnet. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win BW with your excellent sonnet, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 3/22/2018 6:30:00 AM
A lovely sonnet BW.congratulations.
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:38:00 AM
Congrats, BW, a lovely piece, and thanks for entering x
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations, BW on your win. Great imagery.
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Date: 3/19/2018 8:06:00 PM
Colorful and descriptive write. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 3/4/2018 6:13:00 AM
I love this positive, colorful, well flowing sonnet my friend..
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Date: 2/25/2018 9:50:00 PM
this so beautiful , Broken Wings,, luck in the contest...
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Date: 2/25/2018 5:20:00 PM
ahh, this is so sweet, Constance. You decorated your egg eggs-actly right. (yeah, I went for the bad pun). I will have to do MY "mind the wet paint" poem as free verse because as of yet, i have NO free verse for Hamilton's contest and free verse might be neat for this contest!!
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Date: 2/22/2018 10:39:00 AM
Enjoyed the filigree, BW ...
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2018 10:53:00 AM
Probir, thank you for visiting !
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