Mind the Paint

Take three visually vibrant colors
inherent in my desire, heart and mind 
symbolic red cross, Saint George recovers
faith, hope and belonging that doth remind,

dark blue background defines my inner thoughts
no sign of sadness, swirls of happiness 
associated Saint Andrew, great Scots 
marriage of colors, blend of nobleness,

pure as snow, brilliant white shapes my psychic 
clearly brings solitude joining our saints
secured unity, George, Andrew, Patrick 
minds of peace, colors no need for repaints,

my minds colored red, white and blue, not black
safe in the shadow of our Union Jack.

3/9/2018
contest mind the wet paint
Sponsored by Viv Wigley.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Superbly done, Roy. Congrats on your podium win.
Pett Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 5:45 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Line, your support is really appreciated. :))
Haight Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 5:46 PM
Love your painting, your colors and what they represent, Roy! Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sandra
Pett Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 6:30 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Sandra, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 1:48 PM
A very patriotic piece Roy:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Pett Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Thank you very much for your very kind comment and congratulations Jan. :))
Wigley Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest, Roy with this fine patriotic piece. All stand for the anthem... :) Regards, Viv
Pett Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment, congratulations and my placement in your excellent contest Viv, actually I only know two out of the six verses of our national anthem, (shame on me) thanks again for your support. :))
Gentry Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 9:17 PM
Excellent write. Enjoyed reading this, excellent rhyme, interesting. Good luck in contest.
Pett Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Hi Susan, thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes, really pleased you enjoyed reading this. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Lovely!
Pett Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Thank you so much Kim, much appreciated. :))
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 1:26 PM
awesome write, Roy, still do not know what to write... luck in the contest
Pett Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Eve, I am sure when you do it will be exceptional, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Great sonnet Roy, good luck in the contest.
Pett Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Thanks Tom, still not sure if this what Viv is looking for, thanks again for your best wishes much appreciated. :))
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