Mind Rooms

She finds herself
in a room much too small for her mind.

Cigarettes of hope and despair
burn all night.

She eats sporadically,
rehearses her soul-talk regularly.

Her history was once linear,
a straight line
now it is but a mad moment
circling a non-stop mind carousel.

There were men,
many
none now wash their face in her hands.

Alone in her self-separation,
she pens in a time-stained journal
notes upon a former life
that always threatens to
divorce her from herself.

She remains a sister, a mother,
a friend to the always desperate,
but her mind wanders
carrying within it a dazed surmise
together with
many stone-cold for-get-me-nots.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
October 26, 2023 at 2:39 PM
..."stone cold forget-me-nots".. A poignant peek into the minds of many a poet. Nicely done Eric. I flinched a little on reading this ....but then again I would think that all would
Ashford Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 3:54 PM
Cheers Joh L. Sorry for the delay in replying I got locked out of Google - nerd stuff. Thank you for the review.E
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