Mind Over Milkshakes

I was a simple picture of a person,
just a gulp of a guy.
She was not my first girl; she was the second.

It was a Dairy Queen date, 
banana milkshakes, me tanking-up on her foggy 
eyes,
imagining her naked foggy 
female body parts.

It was then that she abruptly
slammed her wet wriggling mind
down on to the plastic tabletop.
A floppy mind it was, with no brains
and no bones.
Her fishy mind edged closer to me
as if wanting to be fed. I fled.

That night I dreamed of her bubbly wet kisses
flying like manta rays
above the rooftops of our town
seeking out foggy young men 
to puddle with.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashford Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Much obliged to you Richard for all your positive comments. I had fun with this one. L'chaim!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 9:12 AM
This brought a number of giggles. I like how your mind works.
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