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Seeker's Mind of the Heart Contest  **  February 24, 2025

Mind of the Heart

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“feeling not thinking, soul with love linking ~
we attained God consciousness unblinking”

There are times I'm torn between feeling and thought,
consciously aware of a dispute between mind and heart.
I become anxious when I realize there's a power struggle 
and my doleful soul seeks a tranquil place to snuggle.
Somewhere deep inside of me where it's more docile
until my heart and mind call for a truce and reconcile.

Unfortunately, that's short-lived... a temporary thing.
Until again, they'll fight like pugilists in a boxing ring.
Rodin didn't sculpt The Thinker inside each human mind
but the psyche often chides the heart, "Love really is blind."
Divine, are those gifts God has so generously given to us
but they don't always come to terms, and it creates a fuss.

The heart yearns for love, the mind searches for a reason.
Scripture says the heart is treacherous and commits treason.
My mind stands guard, to prevent my heart from breaking
but despite the risk, my heart finds it worth the undertaking.
A logical mind weighs pros and cons, thinking pragmatically
Bah, cries a heart, "Life should be lived more romantically."

They grind on each other as if one a mortar, the other a pestle
And so, the mind and heart will continue to quibble and wrestle.
The soul always reappears when a modicum of peace holds fast
but the truce between heart and mind is destined never to last.
Although instrumental to a soul's well-being, they will disagree.
Mind rules a heart, or vice versa. Que sera sera. What will be will be.

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Date: 2/25/2025 2:03:00 PM
I do believe you’ve explained why good girls want bad boys and vice versa. Generally speaking heartache is far worse than headache (there’s no aspirin for heartache). Brilliantly observed and described, Lin.
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Date: 2/25/2025 11:09:00 AM
Lin, I think you are onto something of value in your description. No matter how we try to behave in accordance with our rational thoughts, feelings at times gain the upper hand. This "conflict" can occur prior to any acts. I know it does in mine. Reading this makes me feel more normal and OK. I would like to have more control over this fight than I sometimes do, but alas. I had a dream where I was boxing myself and half my face and my counterpart's was bloodied a couple of nights ago.
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/25/2025 11:41:00 AM
Oh, Duke... if your mind and heart never had such conflicts, you'd NOT be normal. Experience has taught me that the heart has more sway that it should and often gets us in trouble. Ewww, that was more like a nightmare you had rather than a dream. I hope you quickly awakened from that one!
Date: 2/25/2025 4:45:00 AM
Dear Lin, What a breathtaking dance between heart and mind. I love how each stanza pulls me deeper into that eternal tug-of-war. You are one of those poets that have such a great way to convey raw truth and yet, with poetic grace. A masterpiece of soul-searching! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/25/2025 11:38:00 AM
They do seem to dance... around each other at times or have a tug of war battle. The heart wants what it wants but doesn't always get the happy romantic ending of a fairytale. Your compliment about writing with poetic grace is greatly appreciated. Thank you, Daniel.
Date: 2/24/2025 10:25:00 AM
You captured the battle between heart and mind well Lin. Your pen is on fire of late, I don't know where you get all your inspiration from. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/24/2025 10:46:00 AM
At some time a heart has been a battlefield. The scars that remain serve as a sorrowful venue for inspiration, Tom.
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