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Mind of a Serial Killer V

As our eyes locked in the tiny rearview mirror I could see your fear
jerking your arms in a sudden movement
to veer to the side of the road wishing for a way out to unload

But I'm quick to rise and whisper in your ear
'This would not be wise my Sweet Devine'
I see your eyes so full of terror and wide 
as your tears start to slide

My hands creasing up and down your cream color slender neck
your mind wondering what I will do next
as I run my fingers through your long soft hair a beautiful brunette

While my tongue probes around your ear I can smell and taste
your sweet sweat of despair
you seem to enjoy..."Oh my, was that a twitch of a grin on your lips
or just a tiny slip?" as I start to toy

Reaching behind my back I bring to you a single white rose
just for you my Sweet Devine
now that we are so close my blood starts to flow 
my heart wanting to explode 

Gently I place the white rose inside your baby blue dress
giving you full details of directions to our private special nest
as I continue to blow and caress you to impress.

          Do you feel me?   Do you want more?
T reams 4/4/15

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Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/24/2015 5:02:00 PM lovely and sinister Tammy your newest poem is also shown as V change it to V1 hugs 7 Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 7/24/2015 5:16:00 PM Thanks Shadow- it's been awhile- it should be 7 - I have changed the number to VII

James Fraser Date: 4/9/2015 1:59:00 PM Love this Tammy, such anxiety, the tense scene, the intent to follow through. You'll need to follow this up as a short poetry series, hugs, James :) Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 4/10/2015 5:47:00 AM Thank you James for the nice comment. I will try to do number 6 this weekend. Thanking about a book for this one. Just need to know how to get started on one.

Constance La France Date: 4/9/2015 7:06:00 AM Tammy, your poem is so dramatic, I was absorbed in every word, wanting to know that happens next, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 4/10/2015 5:45:00 AM Thank you Broken Wings for the comment. I will try to do number 6 this weekend.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/8/2015 6:36:00 PM The mind of a serial killer is truly delusional, as your poem makes us aware of. Good and creepy one!! Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 4/8/2015 7:04:00 PM Thank you Andrea for the comment. It's fun writing it.

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/8/2015 9:39:00 AM I think that it would be hard to get into the mind of someone so sick but you have done what probably would go through their mind..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 4/8/2015 7:03:00 PM Thank you Sara for the comment.

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/5/2015 6:05:00 AM spine-tingling!.. this is a cliff-hanger, really good but i'm out of here.. :). huggs Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 4/5/2015 7:47:00 AM Thanks nette for the comment. I have a lot of fun writing this. Hugs back to you.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/4/2015 10:00:00 PM Suspense is rising! Creepy good. Please change Threw to through and it will be perfect: Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 4/5/2015 7:51:00 AM Thanks Richard. The word has been changed. Sometimes I write to fast and over look a word even after I have done a proof read. Number 6 will be posted today wanting to write about 25 pages. When the ending comes it will have a huge twist!

Jimi Peranteau Date: 4/4/2015 7:54:00 PM Love the little hints into this killer's psychotic delusions, a line here and there but never too much, as a horror writer myself (not on the soup of course) I can tell you those subtle insights make the entire story. Absolutely a great write, very entertaining please keep 'em coming !!!!! Login to Reply Tammy Reams Date: 4/4/2015 8:07:00 PM Thank you very much for the nice comment jimi. Tell your pop I said hi and I will read some of his writes also. More will be coming.