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Mind of a Serial Killer V

As our eyes locked in the tiny rearview mirror I could see your fear jerking your arms in a sudden movement to veer to the side of the road wishing for a way out to unload But I'm quick to rise and whisper in your ear 'This would not be wise my Sweet Devine' I see your eyes so full of terror and wide as your tears start to slide My hands creasing up and down your cream color slender neck your mind wondering what I will do next as I run my fingers through your long soft hair a beautiful brunette While my tongue probes around your ear I can smell and taste your sweet sweat of despair you seem to enjoy..."Oh my, was that a twitch of a grin on your lips or just a tiny slip?" as I start to toy Reaching behind my back I bring to you a single white rose just for you my Sweet Devine now that we are so close my blood starts to flow my heart wanting to explode Gently I place the white rose inside your baby blue dress giving you full details of directions to our private special nest as I continue to blow and caress you to impress. Do you feel me? Do you want more? T reams 4/4/15

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/24/2015 5:02:00 PM

lovely and sinister Tammy your newest poem is also shown as V change it to V1 hugs 7

Tammy Reams
Date: 7/24/2015 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Shadow- it's been awhile- it should be 7 - I have changed the number to VII

James Fraser

Date: 4/9/2015 1:59:00 PM

Love this Tammy, such anxiety, the tense scene, the intent to follow through. You'll need to follow this up as a short poetry series, hugs, James :)

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/10/2015 5:47:00 AM

Thank you James for the nice comment. I will try to do number 6 this weekend. Thanking about a book for this one. Just need to know how to get started on one.

Constance La France

Date: 4/9/2015 7:06:00 AM

Tammy, your poem is so dramatic, I was absorbed in every word, wanting to know that happens next, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/10/2015 5:45:00 AM

Thank you Broken Wings for the comment. I will try to do number 6 this weekend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2015 6:36:00 PM

The mind of a serial killer is truly delusional, as your poem makes us aware of. Good and creepy one!!

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/8/2015 7:04:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for the comment. It's fun writing it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/8/2015 9:39:00 AM

I think that it would be hard to get into the mind of someone so sick but you have done what probably would go through their mind..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/8/2015 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Sara for the comment.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/5/2015 6:05:00 AM

spine-tingling!.. this is a cliff-hanger, really good but i'm out of here.. :). huggs

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/5/2015 7:47:00 AM

Thanks nette for the comment. I have a lot of fun writing this. Hugs back to you.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/4/2015 10:00:00 PM

Suspense is rising! Creepy good. Please change Threw to through and it will be perfect:

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/5/2015 7:51:00 AM

Thanks Richard. The word has been changed. Sometimes I write to fast and over look a word even after I have done a proof read. Number 6 will be posted today wanting to write about 25 pages. When the ending comes it will have a huge twist!

Jimi Peranteau

Date: 4/4/2015 7:54:00 PM

Love the little hints into this killer's psychotic delusions, a line here and there but never too much, as a horror writer myself (not on the soup of course) I can tell you those subtle insights make the entire story. Absolutely a great write, very entertaining please keep 'em coming !!!!!

Tammy Reams
Date: 4/4/2015 8:07:00 PM

Thank you very much for the nice comment jimi. Tell your pop I said hi and I will read some of his writes also. More will be coming.