Mind Merely Knows

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Mind merely knows, whilst our heart glows One with the universe In stillness slow, our soul mellows Singing the divine verse Single eye spherical By touch vibrational Feels bliss pulse radial Exit shallows Mind merely knows 08-November-2021 Quietus

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/9/2021 8:05:00 AM

I have no idea if you intended to throw in terrific alliterative devices of ir you just write this beautifully naturally; either way, it works.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/9/2021 9:00:00 AM

Not always possible in the compact Quietus form but sometimes alliteration kind of manifests automatically