Mind Made Up

It is black it is white
Either can be right
Reality a factor
Created by grey matter



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David Byrne

Date: 1/11/2019 12:04:00 AM

Clever.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 1/11/2019 9:26:00 AM

Thank you! :))

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/1/2018 11:08:00 PM

Epiphaneous* epigram. *from epiphany, of course. ~ gw

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/2/2018 12:42:00 PM

Awesomeness <3

Bobby May

Date: 12/1/2018 7:21:00 AM

You sure said a lot with just a few words, I love this poem!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/1/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thank you Bobby, :)) xomo

Deb Radke

Date: 11/30/2018 4:38:00 PM

I’ve heard it said that black and white thinking is a detriment of the mind. You, however, have put it into perspective. Really well done. Best wishes. Deb

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/1/2018 8:46:00 AM

I only see grey ;) Thank you Deb, xomo

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/26/2018 12:46:00 PM

Man, this is some slamming truth, MM! I love the way your beautiful mind thinks. Keen perceptions ink expressed. Pure poetry. Love and smiles and smiles of joy always.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/27/2018 12:01:00 AM

Aw thank you Freddie! Loveliness! Warm hugs my friend, xomo!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/25/2018 7:36:00 PM

I like the way you intertwined the colors. It's certainly true what you say. To make such a complex statement in so few words is extra special. Smiling at this one. Thanks.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/26/2018 7:19:00 AM

Using my grey matter ;) thank you Duke! xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/25/2018 6:11:00 PM

Sadly, reality is sometimes not a factor - but well put, enjoyed this!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 11/26/2018 7:12:00 AM

Oh too true ;) this musing a product of a science show on the radio- how each our own reality is essentially a hallucination created by our brain based on information received by our senses (less poetic;) xomo!