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Mind Chaotic Yet Kind

So I start THINKING.                                                                              I should really stop SPEAKING.                                                            
                            
                                                                                                                                                      Before my LOGIC and EMOTION colide--                                           Sometimes I find myself SPEAKING..                                  
Just what it is I am THINKING..                                                      Assume this Dangerous--                                                                  MY Sanity And Reality are no longer LINKING.                                ...I Glance to catch your Reaction..                                       ...Though I Pretend to be BLINKING...                                                          
                                                                                                            
So What comes next?                                                                         I lack SELF VALIDATION..                                                      Which causes The act of SELF-MEDICATION                                                                              My Rational THINKING..PRAYS in WAVES..                          
As They crash into Spiritual HEALING.                                             My ego DIminished;MY humbled self all too REVEALING.             My time you are STEALING..                                                     Your Verbal Salt Preventing my wounded confidence from HEALING.                                                                               Though TRUE..                                                               
I AM an Empath and I'm Always FEELING..                  
Emotions can get the best of me--                                             as I have caught myself in tears KNEELING..                                                                                   I AM now a Self Proclaimed WARRIOR---

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Aqua Marine Date: 7/13/2017 2:56:00 AM I think of the two poems posted, this has great impact- the "chaotic" placement of words adds to the subject, your style is natural, and the "jumpy" rhythm is excellant! Keep up the good work! ( Poetry is a great medium for playing around with words and their medium- and your creativity will expand with self confidence...) I look forward to your next poem posts...) Login to Reply Sara Lucas Date: 7/23/2017 3:03:00 PM Thank you so much for the insight!