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Mind Chaotic Yet Kind

So I start THINKING. I should really stop SPEAKING. Before my LOGIC and EMOTION colide-- Sometimes I find myself SPEAKING.. Just what it is I am THINKING.. Assume this Dangerous-- MY Sanity And Reality are no longer LINKING. ...I Glance to catch your Reaction.. ...Though I Pretend to be BLINKING... So What comes next? I lack SELF VALIDATION.. Which causes The act of SELF-MEDICATION My Rational THINKING..PRAYS in WAVES.. As They crash into Spiritual HEALING. My ego DIminished;MY humbled self all too REVEALING. My time you are STEALING.. Your Verbal Salt Preventing my wounded confidence from HEALING. Though TRUE.. I AM an Empath and I'm Always FEELING.. Emotions can get the best of me-- as I have caught myself in tears KNEELING.. I AM now a Self Proclaimed WARRIOR---

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Date: 7/13/2017 2:56:00 AM
I think of the two poems posted, this has great impact- the "chaotic" placement of words adds to the subject, your style is natural, and the "jumpy" rhythm is excellant! Keep up the good work! ( Poetry is a great medium for playing around with words and their medium- and your creativity will expand with self confidence...) I look forward to your next poem posts...)
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Sara Lucas
Date: 7/23/2017 3:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for the insight!

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