Jenish Somadas Poet Rhyme

Mind Bloom

Little floret, little floret, when will you bloom?
Egging with watchful eyes, I waited for a glance.
Gentle dreams hit my eyes, oh! missed it in that gloom
Engulfed in mystic fragrance, took me into trance.
Drowsy lazy timid mind, one day sure will perfume 
Yes that day, spreading fragrance, makes the world in prance.


Third Place in Each Letter Threads The Verse Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

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Shirley Hawkins May 6, 2020 at 7:52 PM Congratulations on your win,Jenish A very lovely poem I especially like the last two lines ... I trust all is well with you and your family... Take care ... Shirley Jenish Somadas May 9, 2020 at 3:46 AM Thank you Shirley.. Stay safe..

Eve Roper May 2, 2020 at 3:31 PM Jenish, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas May 2, 2020 at 11:52 PM Thank you Eve..

Andrea Dietrich May 1, 2020 at 10:28 AM this is a pretty poem here, Jenish. So sweet! congrats in the contest. Jenish Somadas May 1, 2020 at 11:09 AM Thank you Andrea..

Michelle Faulkner April 30, 2020 at 5:14 PM I love the anticipation and hope in your little floret - congratulations on placing in the contest! Jenish Somadas May 1, 2020 at 12:22 AM Thank you Michelle..

Reason A. Poteet April 30, 2020 at 10:47 AM Neat piece, Jenish, congrats on your win. You've captured my heart as I await the burst of color from two of my favorites. Have a great day waiting. Jenish Somadas May 1, 2020 at 12:21 AM Thank you Reason for your kind words..

Constance La France April 30, 2020 at 10:30 AM Jenish, lovely, congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance Jenish Somadas May 1, 2020 at 12:21 AM Thank you Constance..

Jennifer Proxenos April 30, 2020 at 10:21 AM Well done Jenish - congrats on your lovely win - an exotic write. Blessings, Jennifer. Jenish Somadas April 30, 2020 at 10:28 AM Thank you Jennifer..

Joseph May April 30, 2020 at 9:23 AM Wonderful write Jenish, Congrats on your win Jenish Somadas April 30, 2020 at 10:28 AM Thank you Joseph for conducting this lively contest and thank you so much for including this poem in the winning list..

Janice Canerdy April 30, 2020 at 8:26 AM Jenish, CONGRATS on your placement. Janice Jenish Somadas April 30, 2020 at 9:08 AM Thank you Janice.. Takecare..

Caren Krutsinger April 21, 2020 at 2:21 AM Gorgeous rhyme that made me smile as I read. Jenish Somadas April 21, 2020 at 5:43 AM Thank you Caren for your kind words..

Eve Roper April 18, 2020 at 10:38 AM Jenish, great, rhyme, flow, and content for the contest. Good luck. Stay well and don’t let the isolation get you down. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas April 18, 2020 at 2:27 PM Thank you Eve.. We are ok and doing well in lockdown.. Takecare also..

Janice Canerdy April 18, 2020 at 9:12 AM Jenish, this is lovely and inspirational! Janice Jenish Somadas April 18, 2020 at 2:26 PM Thank you Janice..

Gideon Foli April 17, 2020 at 6:52 PM I love the theme of your poem, it evokes felicity within me. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Cheerio!!! Jenish Somadas April 17, 2020 at 11:51 PM Thank you Gideon for you kind words.. Takecare always..

M. L. Kiser April 17, 2020 at 3:35 PM Nature is truly a place of solace in these times. Enjoyed. Jenish Somadas April 17, 2020 at 11:50 PM Thank you Kiser..Stay safe..

Darlene De Beaulieu April 17, 2020 at 12:34 PM Hello Demetrios,a beautiful flower in this virus world in bloom showing the pretty colors. Have a nice day my friend. Be safe. Darlene De Beaulieu April 18, 2020 at 10:20 AM Hello jenish Somadas, nature is is cold here it feels like winter. When it is suppose to be Spring. Be safe . Enjoy yur day my friend. Jenish Somadas April 17, 2020 at 11:49 PM Yes, nature is booming without human intervention.. Takecare Darlene...

Demetrios Trifiatis April 17, 2020 at 6:25 AM An oasis of a poem amid the horror the world finds itself in dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx Take care! Jenish Somadas April 17, 2020 at 11:48 PM Thank you Demetrios.. Takecare always..