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Little floret, little floret, when will you bloom? Egging with watchful eyes, I waited for a glance. Gentle dreams hit my eyes, oh! missed it in that gloom Engulfed in mystic fragrance, took me into trance. Drowsy lazy timid mind, one day sure will perfume Yes that day, spreading fragrance, makes the world in prance. Third Place in Each Letter Threads The Verse Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May

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Date: 5/6/2020 7:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Jenish A very lovely poem I especially like the last two lines ... I trust all is well with you and your family... Take care ... Shirley
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/9/2020 3:46:00 AM
Thank you Shirley.. Stay safe..
Date: 5/2/2020 3:31:00 PM
Jenish, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. Hugs Eve
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/2/2020 11:52:00 PM
Thank you Eve..
Date: 5/1/2020 10:28:00 AM
this is a pretty poem here, Jenish. So sweet! congrats in the contest.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/1/2020 11:09:00 AM
Thank you Andrea..
Date: 4/30/2020 5:14:00 PM
I love the anticipation and hope in your little floret - congratulations on placing in the contest!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/1/2020 12:22:00 AM
Thank you Michelle..
Date: 4/30/2020 10:47:00 AM
Neat piece, Jenish, congrats on your win. You've captured my heart as I await the burst of color from two of my favorites. Have a great day waiting.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/1/2020 12:21:00 AM
Thank you Reason for your kind words..
Date: 4/30/2020 10:30:00 AM
Jenish, lovely, congratulations on your win in the contest _Constance
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 5/1/2020 12:21:00 AM
Thank you Constance..
Date: 4/30/2020 10:21:00 AM
Well done Jenish - congrats on your lovely win - an exotic write. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer..
Date: 4/30/2020 9:23:00 AM
Wonderful write Jenish, Congrats on your win
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Joseph for conducting this lively contest and thank you so much for including this poem in the winning list..
Date: 4/30/2020 8:26:00 AM
Jenish, CONGRATS on your placement. Janice
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/30/2020 9:08:00 AM
Thank you Janice.. Takecare..
Date: 4/21/2020 2:21:00 AM
Gorgeous rhyme that made me smile as I read.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/21/2020 5:43:00 AM
Thank you Caren for your kind words..
Date: 4/18/2020 10:38:00 AM
Jenish, great, rhyme, flow, and content for the contest. Good luck. Stay well and don’t let the isolation get you down. Hugs Eve
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/18/2020 2:27:00 PM
Thank you Eve.. We are ok and doing well in lockdown.. Takecare also..
Date: 4/18/2020 9:12:00 AM
Jenish, this is lovely and inspirational! Janice
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/18/2020 2:26:00 PM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 4/17/2020 6:52:00 PM
I love the theme of your poem, it evokes felicity within me. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. Cheerio!!!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/17/2020 11:51:00 PM
Thank you Gideon for you kind words.. Takecare always..
Date: 4/17/2020 3:35:00 PM
Nature is truly a place of solace in these times. Enjoyed.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/17/2020 11:50:00 PM
Thank you Kiser..Stay safe..
Date: 4/17/2020 12:34:00 PM
Hello Demetrios,a beautiful flower in this virus world in bloom showing the pretty colors. Have a nice day my friend. Be safe.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2020 10:20:00 AM
Hello jenish Somadas, nature is is cold here it feels like winter. When it is suppose to be Spring. Be safe . Enjoy yur day my friend.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/17/2020 11:49:00 PM
Yes, nature is booming without human intervention.. Takecare Darlene...
Date: 4/17/2020 6:25:00 AM
An oasis of a poem amid the horror the world finds itself in dearest, Jenish! Hugs xxx Take care!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/17/2020 11:48:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios.. Takecare always..

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