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Mind Ascends

Reborn here now without baggage, my soul revels in present peace; Mind ascends through steps to salvage Cares descend and put mind at ease. A stillness in my mind I feel, reborn here now without baggage; As I pray to my Lord with zeal, From inner light shines my image. 'Act with kindness' is the message: Mindful of all my actions though reborn here now without baggage, I know that I reap what I sow. As a part of the Whole, I see, such vibrance like peacock's plumage of soul of the Universe be - reborn here now without baggage. Date: 10/13/2021 Dawn Poetry Contest Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 10/22/2021 9:29:00 AM
Anitha, this is so beautiful~Congratulations! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 10/20/2021 4:54:00 PM
Congrats, my dear friend.
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Date: 10/20/2021 9:36:00 AM
Just lovely Ani - reborn and traveling light! Beautiful flowing lines and rhymes with creative images! Love the peacock reference. Sending you congratulations for your win and blessings! Hugs :D
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Date: 10/19/2021 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Mind ascends" is a lovely write. Have a blessed autumn day writing away.............
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Date: 10/18/2021 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations! All of the wins are so well-deserved! You are very talented and I can almost feel the warmth and kindness emanating from you through your beautiful poem. Fantastic job!
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Date: 10/18/2021 10:24:00 AM
His light is the one to follow. Congratulations Anitha.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/18/2021 10:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Jenna. Yes, true dear... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/18/2021 9:41:00 AM
Love the last verse especially! Congratulations, Anitha!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/18/2021 10:30:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Kim. Yes, I too loved it... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 10/18/2021 6:44:00 AM
The top three entries were neck to neck, all brilliant! I really loved this one! Congrats on your win, Anitha. Thank you for participating and look forward to your entry in the next Quietus contest coming up!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 10/18/2021 10:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Seeker for such an inspiring contest... I thoroughly enjoyed writing for this.. and thank you so very much for my placement. God bless... ~ Ani
Date: 10/16/2021 4:17:00 PM
Anitha. this sure does deserve to win the contest. It is excellent, my sweet friend. I really loved the lines about the peacock. Great imagery.
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Date: 10/15/2021 11:14:00 AM
Such an amazing thought. "Reborn here now without baggage" Anitha, your words caress softly around me and my heart. This is so beautiful and uplifting. May you have a wonderful weekend, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 10/13/2021 8:30:00 PM
Love the spiritual aspect to this wonderful poem.
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Date: 10/13/2021 8:27:00 AM
How smooth your poem, as always. Beautiful imagery and emotions. Best for a win.
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Date: 10/13/2021 8:25:00 AM
You did a superb job, Ani--excellent tone and flow in lovely rhymes. Well done in this hard to execute form.
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