Mind and Then the Body (Christmas 2009)

Christmas Day 2009,
I went to see my grandma for what I'm sure will be the last time,
I enter the code and into the door,
Into the lift to the second floor,
Past the T.V room and an eerie feeling tilted and odd,
The folks in Christmas hats are all on the nod,
The smell of a cheap roast n the stench of getting old,
And my grandma mumbles that the rooms too cold,
She wants to go for a walk but she doesn't know where,
She doesn't remember who I am...
It doesn't seem fair that she was once smart, feisty and bold,
Ive never, not once, thought I'll get that old..
Cant take it, Don't want to see it, the guilt, my grandma all alone,
She lost her mind, her bodies going and it all stated in an old peoples home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/11/2024 11:30:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/27/2016 10:27:00 PM
ed, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:07:00 PM
Ed, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:55:00 AM
Such a sad Christmas story ... and yet it is beautiful because of your love and your compassion. These are the essentials of great poets, and I hope you will write some more, your friend, L'nass
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Date: 2/3/2010 1:01:00 AM
G Day Ed, If this is a true situation. remember the woman she was and treat the woman she is accordingly. Who can tell what she remembers or knows. hope writing about it helps you clarify the situation....cheers Margaret
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ed. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:58:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue to share your creative writings with us all as this truthful rendition of a dread disease taking mind from our loved ones and eventually the body too.. u have stated it so well.. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:20:00 AM
wow. A lot of people go through this but hardly ever do people put it down on paper and make a beautiful teary poem out of it. Keep writing you have a gift
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