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Mind and Mountain

MIND AND MOUNTAIN

Life
A climbing process
A gradual, grand ascent to view?
Mind can inveigle such

To go where all manner wild affecting grows
Foothills of some towering height
Mind can spirit one there

Ascent would be steep
Though earnest, determined
Path narrow
With stones of many sizes underfoot

And trees!
Such a wealth of enduring life
Resonating valley view

At intervals 
See a meadow
Brook and wild life passing through

At one of these lush spreads
I would stop
Dabble toes in the crystal stream

Then push on
Seeking      seeking
A view of the top

And the summit
Hazy through the mist
Well above timberline

Many stones now
Huge boulders
Make faulting my climb

The backward glance, though, faultless, clear
But rare the breath
Weakening the will

At last the top
Ah, the pain!
With blue heaven still afar

Dave Austin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/4/2016 3:04:00 AM
An amazing write, Daver. I honestly don`t know where to begin, this fills the senses and I`m having difficulty pinning down just one. Keep well and stay happy! Love you, Mikki
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Date: 3/1/2016 5:00:00 PM
Love this piece!
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Date: 2/29/2016 6:10:00 PM
WOW, WOW, WOW! I am at a lost for words. A Fav!
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Daver Austin
Date: 3/1/2016 10:58:00 AM
Thanks for climbing the mountain with me. Love, daver
Date: 2/22/2016 4:25:00 PM
This introspective poem is one of your best daver! #7
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Daver Austin
Date: 3/1/2016 11:01:00 AM
The mind is a wonderful thing. I fear I spend too much time tapping it. Thanks, and love, daver
Date: 2/21/2016 12:30:00 PM
oh this is wonderful. And good to see you posting a new poem. it is like the detailed version of the haiku I posted on my mountain scene! Love this.
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:49:00 AM
Daver, fitting, to speak of such expectation so brilliantly! Am making my Spring Wildflower hiking plans in Minnesota now....what with low snow cover this year, and below zero temps...the freeze hit sub-surface seeds long dormant! & good for our northern boreal pine forest re-juvination too (pine seeds need sub-zero temps to split open) I'm ready for such wonder you poetically embrace! Thanks! Jimbo
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