Mill Wheel

The Mill wheel wouldn't turn until the Spring;
the blast of Winter's cold cased it in ice.
Its mighty power adjourned by season's chill
and useless now, it rests until the thaw.

A blizzard piled the snow in massive drifts
that made for good, steep sledding near the Mill.
But children spotted something very weird...
some stains of red beneath the melted snow.

Whispers ran through the town from door to door
that blood was seen on snow beside the Mill,
and some reported howls of wolves at night
that echoed from the river where it stood.

Mid-March, as early Spring softened the ice,
the men arrived to start the Mill's old wheel.
The sluice was jammed with a small fishing boat!
Ice melts...revealing secrets the wheel creaks.


Sandra M. Haight

~6th Place~
Contest: One, Nine, Sixteen v3.0
Sponsor: Viv Wigley
Judged: 07/24/2018

Required Lines To Use:

Line  1- 'The Mill wheel wouldn't turn until the Spring'
Line  9- 'Whispers ran through the town from door to door'
Line 16- 'Ice melts, revealing secrets the wheel creaks'
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George   Avatar
July 28, 2018 at 7:56 AM
Wow! I really enjoyed this, Sandra. Many congrats on your win. elaine
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Thank you very much, Elaine, for your visit and lovely comments. Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great story and imagery. Enjoyed!
Haight Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Thank you very much, Susan. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 2:22 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win.
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:52 PM
Thank you again, Subimal, for the nice visit and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Wigley Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 1:31 AM
Congrats, Sandra, thanks for entering my humble contest. Viv x
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Another great contest, Viv! Thank you for the congrats and my nice placement. Sandra
Dutta Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Perfect narration to match the lines. I enjoyed. All the best.
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Thank you, Anisha! I appreciate your visit and supportive comments very much. Sandra
Nance Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Such a great story teller, I was hooked ;)
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thank you so much, Casarah! Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Great story Sandra, these mills sure are grusome places lol. Good luck. Tom
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Thank you, Tom. I appreciate your visit and supportive comment so much. Sandra
Turner Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 11:49 AM
Wonderful story, Mrs Sandra. That snow sounds pretty good right about now. lol Good luck!
Haight Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Thank you, Daniel! Yeah, the summer's sure been hot! I appreciate your visit and nice comments. Sandra
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