Alexis Y. Poet Free verse

Milky Way

Today I: 

I slid down a lovely rainbow
I danced on a puffy cloud
I took a bite of the milky way
I went to talk to Mr . Moon
I met the star before it fell
I swam across the galaxy 
I visited the land of dreams
It's neighbor was imagination 
Next  I saw dreams being made 
And I plan to take this trip often


12-16-16
Alexis Y

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Peter Dome December 26, 2016 at 6:56 AM Wow what a great adventure, love your clever imagination. you are my inspiration. Well done loved it. My kind of trip. Pete.

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 17, 2016 at 7:22 AM The Milky Way is all good ... but give me the Almond Joy. Delightful flight of imagination, Alexis. Nice dreamy trip, wish we all could take it more often. Laid back poem though. Love and joy to you.

Arthur Vaso December 17, 2016 at 12:44 AM So cute, I have to ask, did you eat Mars Bar? :) Hugs!

Probir Gupta December 17, 2016 at 12:13 AM Lovely images ... Great imagination ... A nice poem ...

Andrea Dietrich December 16, 2016 at 8:51 PM wonderful vision of imagination, Alexis. I really like it.

White Wolf December 16, 2016 at 7:33 PM I wanna come too! Donny leave me behind next time! This is just what I needed today! Thank you, Alexis.

Chris Green December 16, 2016 at 5:12 PM Do you need anyone to tag along with you because this sounds like a trip I'd love to be a part of? This was magical my friend, enchanting and mesmerizing. I'll bet this was fun to write because it sure was fun to read. I think I have stardust in my eyes now. :) Really nice Alexis. Alexis Y. December 16, 2016 at 5:24 PM Hi Chris, Thank you so much. Of course you can come. What are you waiting for let's go.I'm glad you liked it , and yes I did have fun writing this piece. I appreciate that you were the first to comment. Thanks for your continued support. :-) Alexis