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Milkshake

A malted made without the malt You may think a mistake, But take a sip - it still tastes great Though now it's called a shake. A real one, though, comes with a tin Directly from the shaker, A second glass-worth sitting there, A present from the maker. You slurp it down, so cool and sweet And when your straw hits air, You pour a refill from the tin, So calmly waiting there. There's nothing like a milkshake When you're really in the mood - A splurge, a treat, a pure delight And better than most food!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/9/2015 12:40:00 PM
I remember the old soda shops to get a malt. -with bar stools at the counter. Loved it!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/11/2015 4:06:00 PM
oh, i loved those soda shops! going there when i was a kid was a real treat and didn't happen that often, but enough to make it a very sweet memory. thanks for the comment, trevor!
Date: 5/7/2015 9:22:00 AM
Hi, Ilene, Oh, yes, I'm with you. Ice cream satisfies like nothing else. Now if someone would only make it good for you, fat free and no calories that add to the waist line. But I guess there are a few shakes out there that are healthy. I love to try new flavors. A 7 rating....Darlene
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/11/2015 4:05:00 PM
thanks for the comment, darlene! i avoid the healthy ones - if i'm going to splurge on a milkshake, it's gotta be the real thing. same goes for ice cream - no low fat stuff for me!
Date: 5/7/2015 12:58:00 AM
How right you are, Ilene! I love a good milkshake! A delightful write! Love, Kim
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/11/2015 4:04:00 PM
thank you, kim! i don't have them that often but when i get a craving for one, i have to fill it right away! (usually vanilla, but occasionally raspberry or coffee...)
Date: 5/6/2015 4:40:00 PM
The best milkshake I have ever had was in Malta last year ... will be going back later and I know where I will be heading!!! Great write as ever:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/11/2015 4:02:00 PM
it's always a treat to have a milkshake for me. knowing where to get a great one makes it that much easier! thanks, jan...

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