Ilene Bauer Poet Rhyme

Milkshake

A malted made without the malt
You may think a mistake,
But take a sip - it still tastes great
Though now it's called a shake.

A real one, though, comes with a tin
Directly from the shaker,
A second glass-worth sitting there,
A present from the maker.

You slurp it down, so cool and sweet
And when your straw hits air,
You pour a refill from the tin,
So calmly waiting there.

There's nothing like a milkshake
When you're really in the mood -
A splurge, a treat, a pure delight 
And better than most food!

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Trevor Mcleod May 9, 2015 at 12:40 PM I remember the old soda shops to get a malt. -with bar stools at the counter. Loved it! Ilene Bauer May 11, 2015 at 4:06 PM oh, i loved those soda shops! going there when i was a kid was a real treat and didn't happen that often, but enough to make it a very sweet memory. thanks for the comment, trevor!

Darlene Gifford May 7, 2015 at 9:22 AM Hi, Ilene, Oh, yes, I'm with you. Ice cream satisfies like nothing else. Now if someone would only make it good for you, fat free and no calories that add to the waist line. But I guess there are a few shakes out there that are healthy. I love to try new flavors. A 7 rating....Darlene Ilene Bauer May 11, 2015 at 4:05 PM thanks for the comment, darlene! i avoid the healthy ones - if i'm going to splurge on a milkshake, it's gotta be the real thing. same goes for ice cream - no low fat stuff for me!

Kim Merryman May 7, 2015 at 12:58 AM How right you are, Ilene! I love a good milkshake! A delightful write! Love, Kim Ilene Bauer May 11, 2015 at 4:04 PM thank you, kim! i don't have them that often but when i get a craving for one, i have to fill it right away! (usually vanilla, but occasionally raspberry or coffee...)

Jan Allison May 6, 2015 at 4:40 PM The best milkshake I have ever had was in Malta last year ... will be going back later and I know where I will be heading!!! Great write as ever:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx Ilene Bauer May 11, 2015 at 4:02 PM it's always a treat to have a milkshake for me. knowing where to get a great one makes it that much easier! thanks, jan...