Milk Shake Footles

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for Brian Strand's 'YOUR CHOICE J' Poetry Contest

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Hey, make
a shake

silky
milky

very
berry

fruity
beauty

Taste this
graced bliss.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/9/2025 7:47:00 AM

Perfect footies Andrea. You are really good at them. Congratulations! :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/8/2025 3:27:00 AM

i love shakes , they are my favorite ones, ( if understood) but forbidden now because of diabetes 2 , your poem is wonderful thanks poet

Brian Mcclain

Date: 4/7/2025 4:10:00 PM

Berry-berry good, Andrea ! You wouldn't likely remember me, as it's been 9 years, but I just wanted to say Hi and commend you on your consistent excellence and wonderful creative output.

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/7/2025 2:15:00 PM

Very satisfying shake. Trouble is, I still love them...but can't shake the weight anymore. Ah, youth!! Best of luck in contest.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/7/2025 7:43:00 AM

Ah queen of footles! Iv missed reading your footles! I am inspired to try one but i can never write as good as you in these form’s especially sweet andrea! Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes! Sending you light