Milk Shake Footles

Hey, make
a shake

silky
milky

very
berry

fruity
beauty

Taste this
graced bliss.

fruitfootle

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Linda Alice Fowler

April 9, 2025 at 7:47 AM

Perfect footies Andrea. You are really good at them. Congratulations! :)

Yann Rolland

April 8, 2025 at 3:27 AM

i love shakes , they are my favorite ones, ( if understood) but forbidden now because of diabetes 2 , your poem is wonderful thanks poet

Brian Mcclain

April 7, 2025 at 4:10 PM

Berry-berry good, Andrea ! You wouldn't likely remember me, as it's been 9 years, but I just wanted to say Hi and commend you on your consistent excellence and wonderful creative output.

Joseph P. DiMino

April 7, 2025 at 2:15 PM

Very satisfying shake. Trouble is, I still love them...but can't shake the weight anymore. Ah, youth!! Best of luck in contest.

Ink Empress

April 7, 2025 at 7:43 AM

Ah queen of footles! Iv missed reading your footles! I am inspired to try one but i can never write as good as you in these form’s especially sweet andrea! Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes! Sending you light