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for Brian Strand's  'YOUR CHOICE J' Poetry Contest

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Hey, make a shake silky milky very berry fruity beauty Taste this graced bliss.

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Date: 4/9/2025 7:47:00 AM
Perfect footies Andrea. You are really good at them. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/8/2025 3:27:00 AM
i love shakes , they are my favorite ones, ( if understood) but forbidden now because of diabetes 2 , your poem is wonderful thanks poet
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Date: 4/7/2025 4:10:00 PM
Berry-berry good, Andrea ! You wouldn't likely remember me, as it's been 9 years, but I just wanted to say Hi and commend you on your consistent excellence and wonderful creative output.
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Date: 4/7/2025 2:15:00 PM
Very satisfying shake. Trouble is, I still love them...but can't shake the weight anymore. Ah, youth!! Best of luck in contest.
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Date: 4/7/2025 7:43:00 AM
Ah queen of footles! Iv missed reading your footles! I am inspired to try one but i can never write as good as you in these form’s especially sweet andrea! Pleasure reading you today! Best wishes! Sending you light
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Date: 4/7/2025 4:08:00 AM
Ahh!! Added to my hunger. Reads like it was scrumptiously delicious. Sara K
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Date: 4/7/2025 12:36:00 AM
Love this form Andrea, it amazes me how you pack so much into four syllables. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 4/6/2025 8:12:00 PM
A new bar for 'bliss' -- 'tooty fruity!' lol. ~ gw (I go for the low-hanging tooty).
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Date: 4/6/2025 7:38:00 PM
Very nice Wish you the best
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Date: 4/6/2025 6:00:00 PM
Like this Andrea. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/6/2025 6:00:00 PM
I love yourfootles, you still got it! I now add chobani yogurt to my banana, coconut milk shakes, ha.. ;D
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