Milk and Cereal

Crispy leaves sipping Autumn's pour

car roofs collect and bathe in snow

milk and cereal for breakfast.


For Carol Brown's 'Whats the buzz' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Agustin Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 4:29 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 7:57 PM
RUSHDA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
Poet Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Wonderful Haiku!Congrats Rushda on your win!--kashinath
Kendrick Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 4:11 PM
Congratulations on your win...Sara
George   Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Very unique Haiku, Rushda. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Great pleasure to see you Rushda in the successful winner's circle, with this worthy honored place Victory. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:50 AM
What a creative analogy, Rushda! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest Rushda. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Mannan Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 12:16 AM
Many congrats for this win.
Gorelick Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 8:11 PM
Cute! Congrats on your win. BG
Johnson Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 5:14 PM
Peaceful picture. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Congrats Rushda on your wonderful winning poem in Carol's contest .. enjoy another great victory with luv.. for an expressive entry..
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:39 PM
Congratulations on the eleventh place win in the contest of Carol, Rushda
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:23 PM
This is really swell metaphor, Rushda. Glad I got to see it today. Congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 3:10 PM
beautiful thought well expressed. Please give once to the syllable count. Rushda
Mannan Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 4:35 AM
Wow Rushda. Awesome thought beautifully penned.
Nutter Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:50 AM
Excellent entry for Carol's contest. Good luck
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace