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mile end montreal neighborhoods, Artist carole spandau

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Scrooge I am Lovers cold and lost In forest frost Paintings chipped Slippers of golden illusions I feast on Yesterdays dreams With turkey and sour ice cream Maid so overpaid I beg of you Whoever you are Where are my ghosts? Three was it not? Happiness a Christmas knot Around my throat None None at all No Ghosts for me Nether meanders the illusive suffering Notorious angels have no care Crawling along I gasp for air

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Date: 11/9/2017 10:45:00 AM
Terrific write Arthur, A desolate feeling for some, no holiday at all, unfortunately...
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:06:00 PM
asrounding!.. the holy ghost is within you, arthur.. spill ink!..huggs
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Date: 11/8/2017 12:44:00 PM
I hope you find a ghost with Christmas presents...Very nicely done Arthur
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Date: 11/8/2017 9:04:00 AM
Christmas is a special time of the year shoo.. all those ghost away. May you be blessed with happiness at that time and all year round.. Hugs dear friend.
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Date: 11/8/2017 8:47:00 AM
LOVE YOUR POETRY ARTHUR! I'M NEW TO THIS SITE, HOPE YOU DON'T MIND IF I FOLLOW YOU. VICKIE
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Date: 11/8/2017 4:51:00 AM
Very well expressed my friend...and great choice of painting...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/7/2017 10:22:00 AM
well written. Ghosts are ever present. Some feel it,others don't. your poem offers some after thought.
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Date: 11/7/2017 10:08:00 AM
They will come in a form that is familiar and you will not notice. Any errors in judgement might just bring an heir.
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Date: 11/7/2017 7:17:00 AM
You should shorten your name to Art because that is what your poetry truly is!:-) and as for the joys of Christmas bah humbug it can be a sad depressing lonely time for many:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/7/2017 6:09:00 AM
Wow, now this is Poetry at its finest my friend! You have written such a magnificent poem that I have re-read it several times with a spectacular view of your work! Such a delight it was to read this morning Arthur! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/7/2017 1:03:00 AM
Nether meanders, I love that :) We will crawl together my friend
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 11/9/2017 10:42:00 PM
Thanks Darren!!!

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