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through clouds burning gold move masses of water fowl arrows pointing south twilight reflections of brilliant crimson on blue shadows in dark skies cooling breeze whispers as birds fly and summer skies fall into Autumn 08/24/15

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Date: 10/2/2015 11:10:00 AM
awesome imagery... LINDA
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Date: 9/3/2015 8:41:00 PM
Wow amazing haikus. Congratulations! !
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:04:00 AM
James,, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2015 6:31:00 PM
SO GLAD this is on the winners' list. CONGRATULATIONS
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Date: 8/31/2015 4:56:00 AM
Wonderful string of haikus Jamesa! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on yet another big win!
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Date: 8/29/2015 5:30:00 PM
Wonderful!! I just love these, James. Surely you will be getting some contest wins with this one and the tree poem. I sure do hope so! well, finally I am getting out of my house to go swim some laps at the pool. I can't just be sitting all the time!! Good night to you.
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Date: 8/24/2015 12:04:00 PM
wonderful wonderful imagery and I love they shape you have created in your poem very good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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James Inman
Date: 8/24/2015 1:01:00 PM
Thanks Jan.

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