Mighty Tornado

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The storm dissipated on Monday before it reached our home..Then it travel about 20 miles and picked up wind again..One man was killed in another county..

. mighty tornado spring's greatest velocity ... storm dissipated Click on "About This Poem" Dissipated: Meaning here is scattered...

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/22/2011 11:03:00 AM

Very nice haiku here Sara.Enjoyed.

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2011 12:14:00 PM

I have to marvel at the bravery of the people who stay in Tornado Alley in the State's. You can sense their power in your words Sara :)

Jack Horne

Date: 11/19/2011 2:50:00 PM

Powerful piece, my friend. It was certainly a blessing it dissipated. How sad about the man, though.

James Peranteau

Date: 11/19/2011 6:29:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku here dear poet ! I like the "mighty" in this write", surly it depicts this force of nature. Have a wonderful weekend Sara....much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/18/2011 5:59:00 PM

Awesome photo and a wonderful poem, Sara. I'm so glad you and your family were safe from this tornado. There's a great "punch" in this haiku. Nice job! Love, Carolyn

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/18/2011 3:03:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading your amazing write! This poem tells the take from beginning to end...from immediate threat to relieving passing of the storm...Awesome Sara!! Magnificent work!!

Judy Ball

Date: 11/18/2011 1:01:00 PM

WoW! A tornado is sure a scary thing and causes so much damage both physically and materially. Love the pic here. Glad it missed you. God Bless, JB

Joseph Osita

Date: 11/18/2011 10:13:00 AM

Nice haiku, Sara. Have a nice day

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/18/2011 9:32:00 AM

WONDERFUL Haiku Sara and I hear the south is still having some tornados. We are in the mist of snow-snow-and more snow. Over 6 inches fell last night and still more coming down. Shoveled twice already today and do it a little at the time so it will not get to heavy to do all at once.