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Midsummer Eve

Twilight whispers behind the blinds; I barely see, but I believe, In the ruby and orange rinds, Moon blossoms of midsummer eve. I barely see, but I believe In the twinkling star diamonds, Moon blossoms of midsummer eve. Romantic ebon-sky widens. In the twinkling star diamonds, Circling like a halo above, Romantic ebon sky widens; Where there’s darkness, a lunar dove. Circling like a halo above, Juiciness of sluicing hues, wet. Where there’s darkness, a lunar dove. Pearly gates preserve the sunset. Juiciness of sluicing hues, wet, In the ruby and orange rinds. Pearly gates preserve the sunset; Twilight whispers behind the blinds.

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Date: 3/13/2025 11:40:00 PM
Amazing work, what imagery - this enchanted me, and I am faving it.
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Date: 3/13/2025 12:01:00 PM
A magical pantoum ' twilight whispers behind the blinds' - imagery beyond perfect and what I love are your rhyming words dear friend, a fav for me when I write. Blessings dear Kim, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/12/2025 12:10:00 AM
Your pantoum is well written Kim. The imagery is wonderful
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2025 4:01:00 AM
Thank you, Oliver! :)
Date: 3/11/2025 8:00:00 PM
Your pantoum is fascinating. I enjoy the choice of words and rhyme.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 8:34:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda! :)
Date: 3/11/2025 5:06:00 PM
"Twilight whispers behind the blind" Very nicely done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Joe! Glad you liked!
Date: 3/11/2025 4:43:00 PM
Dear Kim, This is absolutely mesmerizing just like a dance of light and shadow, creating such mystery and wonder into the night. I love how your imagery is rich, your rhythm seamless, and the way each line circles back is pure magic. A dreamy, elegant poem. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 6:36:00 PM
Spring Blessings to you too, Daniel! Thank you for your lovely comment! You encourage me!
Date: 3/11/2025 3:00:00 PM
Kim, I remain in awe of your talent. Such a beautiful poem, my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 4:02:00 PM
Jerry, thank you kindly! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 3/11/2025 12:59:00 PM
Kim, your talent has truly shined in the Pantoum form. I think one of your best works! Loved every stanza and refrains ~xhugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 1:29:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya! Hugs :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 1:14:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya! Hugs :)
Date: 3/11/2025 11:02:00 AM
Oh Kim that is just incredibly beautiful! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 11:22:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Deb!
Date: 3/11/2025 10:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. This week the moon turns red. Have a fun day as you write away..........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/11/2025 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, Paula!

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