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Midst Life's Maze

Many times challenged mysteriously by life’s enigmas multifaceted… midst reality maze along sinuous whereabouts… mostly posing as a puzzle meaningfully presented --- yet becoming meaningless with twisting complexities or even magical enclosed around wall of make-believe pursuits… my soul, wandering as a lost pilgrim miserably trapped within web of unbelief mourns to find divine paths… Mercifully, I get rescued, while my heart yearning for peace miraculously finds freedom from mighty* Saviour Who’s ready... moment by moment --- turning my enlightened faith toward His majestic garden of replenishment… making me strong now more fervent to serve, blest... ministering gladly, ascending mount of triumph by God’s grace magnified. *Isaiah 60:16 …Thou shalt know that I the LORD am thy Saviour and thy Redeemer, the mighty One of Jacob. June 29, 2020 5th place, "Maze - 10 Word Challenge" Poetry Contest Sponsored by A Dear Heart; judged on 6/30/2020.

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Date: 7/1/2020 8:45:00 PM
Beata, I enjoyed your unique format for this entry, as well as all the lines beginning with "M" words. Always giving glory to the Lord. Congrats on your win, my friend. Grace and peace ~ John
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Date: 7/1/2020 3:44:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your win in my maze contest, I see you changed the title_Constance
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Date: 7/1/2020 2:48:00 PM
A soothing write Beata! Love the creative presentation of your beautiful words. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 7/1/2020 1:01:00 AM
my soul, wandering as a lost pilgrim.. Wow.. Wonderful write Beata.. Great creativity.. Congrats..
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Date: 6/30/2020 6:34:00 AM
A brilliant take on the theme with the given words, Beata:)
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Date: 6/29/2020 9:06:00 AM
Very creative Beata, great use of the allocated words. Good luck in the contest Tom
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