Mid-October Scenery

For the mid-October contest of Andrea Dietrich
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dipping amber leaves
Earth spray-paint mid-October
crisp breeze, vibrant hues ...
reshaping insight whispered,
quaintness awakened for fall

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Ink Empress

October 29, 2023 at 3:28 AM

You are so good with imagery. Happy for your win! Congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

October 28, 2023 at 10:16 AM

very nicely done, Sotto. Congrats.

Sotto Poet

October 28, 2023 at 12:50 PM

Much appreciate your reading, placing, and commenting on my poem, Andrea. Be blessed

Bj Legros Kelley

October 18, 2023 at 2:17 PM

I love this poem, very refreshing. The autumn season is my favorite of the seasons.

Silent One

October 16, 2023 at 11:31 AM

In a restricted from you created such vivid imagery of Autumn. Great choice of words which help with this form.. An excellent entry for this contest..

Victor Buhagiar

October 16, 2023 at 8:45 AM

A beautiful and magnificent tanka. Good luck with the contest. Blessings.

Ink Empress

October 16, 2023 at 7:06 AM

Love this tanka on october! So well crafted in few syllables! Love the line “ dipping amber leaves“ so fitting for the theme! “ crisp breeze, vibrant hues “ so autumnal! “ reshaping insight whispered,“ change of seasons and how it can reshape insight as colours too vary so well articulated! Loved reading this!