Emile Pinet Poet Quintain (Sicilian)

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Halfway Through October:
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
10/16/2023

         

Mid-October Freckles

Orange mid-October freckles blemish the trees,
while Jack Frost etches abstracts on cold window panes.
And cinnamon-colored leaves fall with each brisk breeze
as Winter subtly approaches, and Summer strains
to maintain green canopies till November's freeze.

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Ink Empress October 29, 2023 at 2:54 AM I love the opening line the most, so creative and unique! Beautiful imagery! Soulful! Well deserved win. Congratulations Emile Pinet October 29, 2023 at 7:44 AM Thanks, Ink Empress; I appreciate your comments my friend; Emile.

William Kelii Kekaula October 28, 2023 at 11:42 AM I love the title-grabber! I read the other Quintain, ababb, and I delight in the marvelous opportunities that this Poetic Form obliges the readers. Yours is a memorable compliment, Emile! My hat's off to you for your righteous 1st placement win in Andrea's contest, my friend! Aloha, William Emile Pinet October 29, 2023 at 7:50 AM Thanks, William; I appreciate your comments; as always, it is good to hear from you my friend; Emile.

Sara Kendrick October 20, 2023 at 8:58 AM Creative and descriptive lines penned about the season change and beauty. Thanks for sharing. Sara K Emile Pinet October 20, 2023 at 11:17 AM Thanks, Sara; I appreciate your comments, my friend; Emile.