Midnight's Miracle

Moonlight glistened like stars on the snowy mountain lane
   Ascending to a mesa above the timberline
Horses from the valley ranch often grazed with free rein
   More than once fillies had climbed up the steep incline

One morning after the mare Midnight had disappeared
   Ranch hands formed a posse and set out to search the hills
The raven-black horse was loved; for her safety they feared
   A winter storm set in; hands faced heavy snow and chills

As night approached, dejected posse members returned
   The ranch owner consoled them and offered his deep thanks
All felt their rescue mission failed, hung their heads concerned
   As snow piled high, blowing, drifting into heavy banks

Three days of frigid weather kept horses inside their stalls
   Passing Midnight’s empty booth made rugged cowboys sad
It was on the fourth day they witnessed an end to snow squalls
   A sight on the mountain trail turned many faces glad

Midnight slowly plodded down the hill, nudging her foal
   A painted pony, black with vivid spots of white
The colt looked like her mother, covered with flakes of snow
   Hoof prints down the mountainside shone in morning light 

Midnight had taken shelter inside a tiny cave
   Just large enough for a determined equine mother
To rest a few days after birthing a stunning babe
   A miracle, ranch hands said, unlike any other


Theme: Horses and Snowflakes
For Constance, a Rambling Poet's "Horses or Snowflakes or Horses and Snowflakes" contest
by Carolyn Devonshire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Hey, Congratulations, Carolyn. I think I read this before and it is one totally deserving of top ten win! LUv, Andrea
Bagnall Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 6:21 AM
That one made me smile - thanks. Congrats on the placement
Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on your fifth place win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:07 AM
one excellent peace here my friend
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:59 PM
I loved this poetic story the first time I read it , congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Many congratulation's Carolyn on your win in Constance's fine contest. Hope your travelling is going ok >> James
Mannan Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 9:09 PM
A truly beautiful miracle Carolyn. Many congrtulations dear friend for this win.
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 1:03 PM
A great poem about nature and the resourcefulness of animals. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol
Bailey Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 1:43 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks.
Kroeger Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 8:03 PM
Beautiful!! You are such an amzing writer! Much love, Emily
Henderson Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 12:56 AM
This is so good. So conceiveable, It could be true. I believe your trip has motivated you. Charles
Babcock Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 9:21 AM
I love happy endings and what a wonderful story you have told. Good luck on the contest I know it is a winner. God Bless Phyl
Fraser Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 8:36 AM
It reads like a short story with a marvellous start and happy ending as all stories should be. Another piece of Carolyn magic we have come to adore. Good luck in the contest American Dove >> James ;)
Locksley Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 11:40 AM
What a great story told in verse form. It could be a Lifetime movie for Christmas time! Good luck in the contest.
Neels Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 10:17 AM
Beautiful write Carolyn, you just took me to another dimension with his write of yours. Wishing you the best with this jewel. Love Wilma
Beesley Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 11:36 AM
beautiful poetry
Onclaud Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 10:20 AM
brilliant flow of poetic imagery, carol.. best of luck to you! warmest, nette
Freeman Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 8:09 PM
You're good a this(!) My Lady!! It's bedtime but I am coming back to take my time and enjoy this. Sorry though, pickle story is true. But! Vinegar and salt brine kills all harmful effect. Just don't remember the story and enjoy your Dills!! Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 12:11 PM
And the winner is..........I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carolyn. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Rhinem Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Smile ~ I love the thought of a black coltess with sprinkles of white snowflakes adorned & yet, my favorite horse of all time was a brilliant black colt named "Sunday Silence;" he won the Kentucky Derby back in 89' I believe? ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Precious Carolyn Devonshire,' Amid The Rainbows Painted Colours of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Beautiful Lady!":) ~
Rhinem Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Smile ~ Bloodlines still running through the veins of time ~ You know, "Lovely Lady," I once knew a couple of Jersey Girls from these walls at Soup; very gifted & beautiful poetess' ~ JeanMarie Marchese & Cortney Bartholomew ~ "Wonderful Poe My Dear & A Fave" ~ Good to see "Your Beauty" again &, "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ ....Cont:)
Rhinem Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 9:29 AM
Smile ~ "BEAUTIFUL" ~ "Hello, 'Dear Lovely, Precious & Priceless Carolyn Devonshire!!!'" ~ Hope that "Your Beauty" is doing well dear &, glad to hear that "Your Treasures" made it to Jersey &, "Thank You" for stopping by & will do although, I believe that the title says a lot amid itself, actually my dear....Smile, I love this wonderful poe for I have Always loved horses perhaps because of humankinds dependence upon them throughout the centuries ~ ....Cont:)
Austin Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 7:59 AM
The man who wrote "Neat and Tidy" is in a box. This is not necessarily myself, but then.....Love, Dave
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