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Midnight's Miracle

Moonlight glistened like stars on the snowy mountain lane Ascending to a mesa above the timberline Horses from the valley ranch often grazed with free rein More than once fillies had climbed up the steep incline One morning after the mare Midnight had disappeared Ranch hands formed a posse and set out to search the hills The raven-black horse was loved; for her safety they feared A winter storm set in; hands faced heavy snow and chills As night approached, dejected posse members returned The ranch owner consoled them and offered his deep thanks All felt their rescue mission failed, hung their heads concerned As snow piled high, blowing, drifting into heavy banks Three days of frigid weather kept horses inside their stalls Passing Midnight’s empty booth made rugged cowboys sad It was on the fourth day they witnessed an end to snow squalls A sight on the mountain trail turned many faces glad Midnight slowly plodded down the hill, nudging her foal A painted pony, black with vivid spots of white The colt looked like her mother, covered with flakes of snow Hoof prints down the mountainside shone in morning light Midnight had taken shelter inside a tiny cave Just large enough for a determined equine mother To rest a few days after birthing a stunning babe A miracle, ranch hands said, unlike any other Theme: Horses and Snowflakes For Constance, a Rambling Poet's "Horses or Snowflakes or Horses and Snowflakes" contest by Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 11/5/2010 9:51:00 AM
Hey, Congratulations, Carolyn. I think I read this before and it is one totally deserving of top ten win! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:21:00 AM
That one made me smile - thanks. Congrats on the placement
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Date: 10/30/2010 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your fifth place win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:07:00 AM
one excellent peace here my friend
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:59:00 PM
I loved this poetic story the first time I read it , congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:52:00 AM
Many congratulation's Carolyn on your win in Constance's fine contest. Hope your travelling is going ok >> James
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:09:00 PM
A truly beautiful miracle Carolyn. Many congrtulations dear friend for this win.
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:03:00 PM
A great poem about nature and the resourcefulness of animals. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:12:00 PM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 1:43:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks.
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Date: 10/16/2010 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful!! You are such an amzing writer! Much love, Emily
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Date: 10/16/2010 12:56:00 AM
This is so good. So conceiveable, It could be true. I believe your trip has motivated you. Charles
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:21:00 AM
I love happy endings and what a wonderful story you have told. Good luck on the contest I know it is a winner. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:36:00 AM
It reads like a short story with a marvellous start and happy ending as all stories should be. Another piece of Carolyn magic we have come to adore. Good luck in the contest American Dove >> James ;)
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Date: 10/14/2010 11:40:00 AM
What a great story told in verse form. It could be a Lifetime movie for Christmas time! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/14/2010 10:17:00 AM
Beautiful write Carolyn, you just took me to another dimension with his write of yours. Wishing you the best with this jewel. Love Wilma
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Date: 10/13/2010 11:36:00 AM
beautiful poetry
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Date: 10/13/2010 10:20:00 AM
brilliant flow of poetic imagery, carol.. best of luck to you! warmest, nette
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Date: 10/12/2010 8:09:00 PM
You're good a this(!) My Lady!! It's bedtime but I am coming back to take my time and enjoy this. Sorry though, pickle story is true. But! Vinegar and salt brine kills all harmful effect. Just don't remember the story and enjoy your Dills!! Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/12/2010 12:11:00 PM
And the winner is..........I enjoyed reading your poetry today Carolyn. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/12/2010 9:46:00 AM
Smile ~ I love the thought of a black coltess with sprinkles of white snowflakes adorned & yet, my favorite horse of all time was a brilliant black colt named "Sunday Silence;" he won the Kentucky Derby back in 89' I believe? ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Precious Carolyn Devonshire,' Amid The Rainbows Painted Colours of, 'Beautiful Love;'" Bye, "Dear Beautiful Lady!":) ~
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Date: 10/12/2010 9:36:00 AM
Smile ~ Bloodlines still running through the veins of time ~ You know, "Lovely Lady," I once knew a couple of Jersey Girls from these walls at Soup; very gifted & beautiful poetess' ~ JeanMarie Marchese & Cortney Bartholomew ~ "Wonderful Poe My Dear & A Fave" ~ Good to see "Your Beauty" again &, "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 10/12/2010 9:29:00 AM
Smile ~ "BEAUTIFUL" ~ "Hello, 'Dear Lovely, Precious & Priceless Carolyn Devonshire!!!'" ~ Hope that "Your Beauty" is doing well dear &, glad to hear that "Your Treasures" made it to Jersey &, "Thank You" for stopping by & will do although, I believe that the title says a lot amid itself, actually my dear....Smile, I love this wonderful poe for I have Always loved horses perhaps because of humankinds dependence upon them throughout the centuries ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 10/12/2010 7:59:00 AM
The man who wrote "Neat and Tidy" is in a box. This is not necessarily myself, but then.....Love, Dave
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