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Midnight Verse-Introducing: Red Fiery and Poet Destroyer

The raven sky colored with white clouds 
lifted its veil 
Patiently waiting for its radiance to reveal 
I watch these stars while you bathe in the sun 
Our two world's apart, still the sky is one 
The sunlight touches my warm feet, 
While the gentle breeze embraces your heart beat 

Stardust and Nightingales paint the sky 
worldwide 
As the sun turns in, now it's my time to hide 
Tonight I embrace the same stars you slept with 
Dreaming while you savor the sun made myth 
This night I tuck my nightmares under my pillow, 
Bathed by the stars, you romanced with your glow 


Thank you so much Poet Destroyer for collaborating with me...Hugs Red

Copyright © Red Fiery | Year Posted 2016

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Brian Dempsey Date: 5/17/2016 10:00:00 AM What a wonderful collaboration! Very lovely imagery. :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/30/2016 7:03:00 PM Hello Red, stopping by to say hi. :) enjoying our collaboration once again. LINDA Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:40:00 AM You are awesome Linda :)

Robert Lindley Date: 3/27/2016 9:14:00 AM A clear example of two extremely talented poets created a masterpiece. Adding this jewel to my fav list.. You two weaved a tapestry that delights the reader! Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:41:00 AM Thanx Robert ! I appreciate your visits...:)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/22/2016 11:10:00 AM Good morning Red. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:42:00 AM Hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/20/2016 2:02:00 PM This is fantastic, Red Fiery. One thing about PD. She is SO GOOD at taking another person's poetry and matching it in flavor! I don't even know which part is hers and which part is yours. That is the sign of a really nice collab. YES! Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:43:00 AM Dear Andrea, you are a fantastic writer ...thank you for supporting my work too..:)

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/20/2016 1:47:00 PM stuning collab from you and PD... such lilting flow, ohh!..huggs Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:44:00 AM thank you Nette...:) I appreciate your support and ur visits...xxx

Ralph Sergi Date: 3/20/2016 7:43:00 AM Hi Red: Beautiful collaboration! Thank you for your comment my poem. Login to Reply

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/20/2016 12:43:00 AM "Dreaming while you savor the sun made myth" how deliciously poetic, Red. I'm loving the marriage of dark and light ... the physical distance being no match for the emotional connection, between you and your love. And oh ... tucking your nightmares under your pillow. That's a sweet visual. You two worked very well together! Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 3/20/2016 1:48:00 AM Thank you so much Timothy... ;)

Tim Smith Date: 3/19/2016 10:27:00 PM Very nice collaboration. The stars definitely aligned : Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:44:00 AM Thank you Tim:) I like ur love poems tooo...:)

Constance La France Date: 3/19/2016 8:40:00 PM Red, you both did an amazing job writing this poem, it is hard to tell who is who, it flows so well together, well done you two, 7~ Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:46:00 AM Thank you Broken wings..) You lifeted my soul with some of your poems...I really mean it !

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/19/2016 7:25:00 PM You both wrote magnificent lines! Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:46:00 AM Thank you dear...:)

Cherl Dunn Date: 3/19/2016 1:16:00 PM Dear Red A wonderful collaborating with the two of you, a perfect match fullfilled in line and verse, great job ladies with such excellent imagery left behind in the minds of your readers, awesomely inspirational, cheri dunn and thanks for the review of my piece also glad you liked it so much, cheri Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:48:00 AM Thank u Cherl...:)

John-Ovan.P. Hull Date: 3/19/2016 10:37:00 AM Some great imagery produced there, and your two styles compliment each other admirably. Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:49:00 AM Thank you Johny Boy...:) How did you celebrate your birthday?

Paul Callus Date: 3/19/2016 9:50:00 AM I read elsewhere about this co-write which was in the making, Red, and I've been watching out for it. I love how you two interact world's apart; distance is no deterrent! The opening and closing lines wrap the contents beautifully! Well done!! ~ hugs // paul Login to Reply Red Fiery Date: 5/14/2016 9:47:00 AM Thank you dearest...ur poems are a delight...:)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/19/2016 9:36:00 AM I'm glad and had the honors in writing with you, much please to enjoy the same stars. Red Fiery, you did amazingly with connecting the stars... like you said, AS ONE.... Enjoyed... a 7 and favorite. Love Linda Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/19/2016 7:25:00 PM Well done Linda.