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Midnight In January

Another sleepless night, I watch the snow fall. Furious flurries in a heavenly jailbreak, they pile up in the window corners anonymously. One itinerant catches itself on the middle of the pane, an unafraid renegade. I lean closer to admire but its identity slides down the glass, melted by my curious breath. Joining others of a lesser fate, they form a rivulet and fall to the frozen earth below.

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Date: 6/13/2022 9:49:00 AM
Barbara, this is an AWESOME poem--love the great figures of speech. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Barbara Steiner
Date: 6/13/2022 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Janice!
Date: 6/13/2022 8:08:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Barbara Steiner
Date: 6/13/2022 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Beata!
Date: 6/13/2022 4:23:00 AM
You have painted such a picture in such a unique way, Barbara. Congratulations on your win.
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Barbara Steiner
Date: 6/13/2022 5:17:00 AM
Thank you Elaine.
Date: 6/10/2022 11:31:00 AM
Snowflakes can become a pane . . . .Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Barbara Steiner
Date: 6/13/2022 5:18:00 AM
Ha Ha!

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