Midnight Feathers

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Midnight Feathers

~Midnight Feathers~

*
plume after plume
stuck in my heart
your eyes, deep as dark

morning lust
goosebumps in the afternoon
midnight smoke

plume after plume
plucked from  my heart
together we feather 
-----------------apart


**SKAT**
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 5/4/2017 6:34:00 PM
Great imagery! Favorite line: "goosebumps in the afternoon, midnight smoke"
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Date: 9/12/2016 12:45:00 PM
I like the picture you presented with that poem. It's very clear and charismatic.
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Date: 9/7/2016 12:59:00 PM
Really epigrammatic love poem in form of Haiku.
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Date: 8/18/2016 4:31:00 AM
They're amazing, SKAT A! I really like your poems :) :)
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Date: 8/3/2016 6:40:00 AM
Excellent metaphor to describe passion, SKAT:
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Date: 7/25/2016 5:42:00 PM
These haiku are a treat! ; ) I am hope you become inspired to write more.
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Date: 7/17/2016 11:17:00 AM
I like your short poems SKAT A, it is hard to write a short poem I think.
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Date: 7/2/2016 1:40:00 PM
Very interesting poem, Louis.
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Date: 6/3/2016 5:05:00 AM
very pretty :)
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Date: 5/30/2016 12:15:00 PM
Nice set of haiku ! Thanks for your welcome here. Aloha, Cheryl
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Date: 4/26/2016 10:26:00 AM
Awesome piece!
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Date: 4/21/2016 4:46:00 AM
Midnight Feathers is a heartfelt write up ??
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Date: 4/8/2016 10:03:00 PM
Wonderful write.
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Date: 3/14/2016 8:56:00 PM
Hello there, midnight feathers!! Nice seeing these again and to wish you a happy good night!! (thanks for putting up your contest results!!)
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Date: 1/25/2016 7:26:00 PM
I love it! So well done, especially your third piece, and the second... oh hell, and the first!!! COOL! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/19/2016 11:08:00 PM
Great imagery Thank you
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Date: 1/6/2016 1:01:00 PM
Your sharing never fails to render me more humble, not knowing gems of the art as you.
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:26:00 PM
Rereading this one. It's fun to read haiku! Thanks for taking time to see my poem, sweet friend.
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:55:00 PM
Once again i did forget to leave the rating, that's it done now. This Haiku finds its way into my faves,
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Date: 1/3/2016 1:53:00 PM
Hi Skat, well that is the Ku is it not, one can stay traditional or do ones own way. So it should always be in poetry. Personally i really like this one, it reads well. I like your freestyle....Vladislav. A definite seven skat.
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Date: 12/26/2015 9:15:00 AM
Excellent use of metaphor. What beautiful words you write. :-)
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Date: 12/8/2015 8:57:00 PM
Beautiful write SKAT.
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Date: 12/8/2015 11:37:00 AM
beautiful symphony.. !!!
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Date: 12/1/2015 2:07:00 PM
Very well done...and particularly striking is that metaphor,--the fragility of relationships...
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Date: 11/13/2015 3:04:00 AM
Both clever and rich in content. Well done in conveying your theme succinctly well. Hope you are keeping well.
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