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Mid Life Cry Sis

A middle-aged woman named Jill Believed she was over the hill Then pizza-boy Fred Delivered in bed And now she's gone back on the pill Teenage lads soon knocked on her door With iPhones recording the score The smiles on our street Are a treat to greet For Jill's not alone anymore!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/30/2018 10:25:00 PM
Hmm, it seems as though Jill has had her fill. Then again, maybe not. Very clever and creative. :) Brandy
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/31/2018 4:14:00 PM
Mahalo nui loa, Brandy! Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/30/2018 5:15:00 PM
Poor Jill. Sexted by the pizza boy. What a sad sad (but funny) tale of passion and pepperoni Rico!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/30/2018 10:06:00 PM
Sad? Did you know there were that many lads who love cold pizza? Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/30/2018 2:15:00 PM
Oh you're a HOOT Rico! ;D Hilarious! I knew opening this I was gonna get me some (fun) xomo!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/30/2018 10:05:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words and for making the time to write them! Aloha! Rico