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Mid-Summer Seen

Love enters through my eyes,a smile so shy A frisson ,toe to toe,each touch tingles As mystery and arousal mingles And looks attracted, a lingering sigh. Close together into emotions dance Our passion pulsates,as flirtations fly Ardour's palpatations can never die As love engages ,on first acquaintance. The friendship flowers,boundaries unbared Fervour pinnacles to undreamed of heights Love explored upon silken Summer nights Commitment binds a future to be shared Togetherness kindles fidelity Igniting love into eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/8/2008 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful and full of motion and emotion.
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Date: 8/16/2008 4:16:00 PM
Wow full of passion what a great write! Laura :)
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Date: 8/16/2008 3:19:00 PM
a fine piece you wrote Brian. enjoyed reading this. thank you for reading through the mist and for your comment
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Date: 8/16/2008 1:59:00 PM
Very well done, gentle, passionate and love the closing. You always amaze me. Regards Heidie
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Date: 8/16/2008 8:58:00 AM
Brian, I was almost embarrassed but the ending was well worth the read. Beautiful is all I can say. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 8/16/2008 6:47:00 AM
WOW! Absolutely off the scale, passionate, beautiful - perfect! Gorgeous Sonnet! Outstanding love poem. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/16/2008 4:11:00 AM
Suuuuuper word~flow , as always....
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