Mid-Summer Rain

Mid-Summer Rain

The warm sun rises
to take the fleeting life
of the morning dew.

The blazing sun makes
the red horizon laugh
by spreading its
dazzling white radiance.

The sizzling sun bathes
the folks in sweat
as they run and exercise
on the sidewalks and parks.

The fierce sun embraces
and scorches the skin 
of the outside laborers.

Summer is the whining
of the boiling sweat, or
the restless lamentation
of the electric fans?

As I was ploughing through
this mid-summer’s lap and
yearning for some cool breeze,
A wind blew, a thunder was heard,
One drop, many drops,
you came pitter patter,
with the smell of fresh soil,
Oh my mid-summer rain!

I cannot stop gazing
at your dancing beauty.
As you slide down,
Caressing the tree leaves,
This fire-baked Earth
chilled in salvation
so my body and soul!

Come often to wipe off the sweat
and to wash away the grime.
Come often to dampen the dryness
and to hold off the drought.
Come often and often,
Oh my mid-summer rain!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 3/25/2024 5:58:00 AM
Sweet nature based poetry Saivi. A belated welcome to PS
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 3/25/2024 10:49:00 AM
Thank you Tom. I am glad that you liked it.
Date: 6/5/2023 4:17:00 PM
I love the rain. I love this poem! Wonderful expression, Saivi. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 6/5/2023 7:56:00 PM
Thank you Mr.Shane. I will be writing more.
Date: 5/31/2023 7:56:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Saivi Kurian
Date: 5/31/2023 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Beata Agustin
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