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Mid-Noon Moon

MID-NOON  MOON

   
         Under dazzling blazing Sun, Moon dull cool and calm
        Day sky unbiased with both Sun - Moon to welcome.
        
        Opal-faced opaque hazy crazy sad Moon
        looking blunt misty wearisome flat bland at noon. 
     

     09/23/20

  Original poem: ' Moon  At   Noon '  dated  03/20 / 19      

 ' Rithimus  Divisa 6 '   Contest by Gregory R. Barden

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Everleigh Blackburn

Date: 8/22/2024 4:12:00 PM

You are very descriptive and I enjoy that in a poem, keep up the good work

Everleigh Blackburn

Date: 8/22/2024 4:10:00 PM

I love the sun and moon. I like how you describe the two beautifully